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| audaciousblonde 2007-07-05 ch 7,  | abuseHe sweeps her off her feet at Christmas!! What a way to end the story! I love how much progress Danny has made since meeting Montana. You captured it beautifully. Super!! :) |
| Murgy31 2007-07-05 ch 7, | abuseWhat an awesome ending to the story! Fabulous! |
| TriGemini 2007-07-05 ch 7, | abuseAs always this was great to read. Really enjoyed it. |
| Murgy31 2007-07-04 ch 6, | abuseAwesome ending! I loved it start to finsh!! |
| TriGemini 2007-07-04 ch 6, | abuseAwe...the ending to this chapter was really sweet to read. It sounds like Lindsay had a real impact on Danny's life. Especially, if he's changing his view on love. Looking forward to the rest. Until then. |
| TriGemini 2007-06-27 ch 5, | abuseAnother good chapter! I really enjoyed this one particular part. Somehow it really shows that Danny cared for Lindsay enough to wait until she was ready to be with him. When you love someone with all your soul, with every beat of your heart and every breath from your lungs, sometimes you have to give them space in order to show just how much you really care. Really enjoyed it. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-06-27 ch 5, | abuseDanny getting kidnapped is love angst :D now if only Linds came in guns blaazing after him...oh well. love it hun! great job, can't wait for more! |
| Murgy31 2007-06-27 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter as always! |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-06-27 ch 4, | abuse*sigh* I love D/l moments...like so much! |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-06-27 ch 3, | abuse"I realised then that I loved her." *knocks danny on the head* Well duh of course you love her you lunkhead! You're only figuring this out now? |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-06-27 ch 2, | abuseScore one for the city boy! Loved that line hun, great start! |
| audaciousblonde 2007-06-26 ch 4, | abuseI'm enjoying this trip back through the D/L past. I like the way that you've centered this one around Danny's POW. He's lost a lot, and losing Linds would have been terrible. I'm so glad he realized how much he loved her. |
| TriGemini 2007-06-26 ch 4, | abuseAnother wonderful chapter! Somehow I believe you captured Danny's emotions perfectly from when Lindsay went undercover. He must have really thought he'd lose her, or he wouldn't have held her so close in the end when he found her. Plus, it must have been hard for him also when he was forced to watch her walk away from him when she told him that for the moment there couldn't be anything between them. However, it's a good thing to know that he didn't give up. Looking forward to more. Until then. |
| Murgy31 2007-06-26 ch 4, | abuseAwesome chapter! I love the fact that you telling the story through Danny's eyes. Its really brilliant! |
| Murgy31 2007-06-25 ch 3, | abuseGreat Chapter! |