Brilliant comes to mind no other words can express what I'm thinking right now. Loved it.

An impressive bit of story telling. Love it.

Another brilliant fic from you! Honestly, this one was pure genius and amazingly well-written. Nice work, mate!

~Shaliza :)

Oh...amazing.

Awesome fic :)
I like how you were creative enough to use the Davy Jones/Calypso story to show your thoughts on Teague's background.
Great job on the emotion as well.

Wow. I like this a lot! You took the general plot and made it your own, and I love everything you did with it. I esp. liked young Teague! :) Keep writing, please!!

Loved this fanfic!

Okay... first off, wow. I dont know why this story isn't getting very much recognition. I think it's utterly beautiful. It's not too much to handle or anything. Just... well, just right.

I'm not very good at reviewing, nor do I do it very often, but honestly? I'm glad to see someone tackling this relationship. I adore Davy Jones/Calypso, and I think more people need to look into it. I mean, it's one of the most human relationships in any of the Pirates movies. So I'm really, really happy to see a good writer like yourself taking that subject and playing with it.

This was extraordinarily good. :3 Just letting you know is all.

Kind of dragged on, but it was very well done. Nice little insights. Like the separation between the sea and a woman. All different facets of the same jewel.

Wonderful; keep writing!

Wow! I really loved this fanfic! ^^

Wow. Intriguing idea! I do not really believe that Captain Teague became a pirate lord just by grace of Davy Jones (it does take a lot out of Jack Sparrow and family to have them mere appointments of luck and the grace of others); but I do love your story. And Davy Jones take and feelings in all this are greatly described. Thank you for writing and sharing! -Aislynn

Beautiful and haunting... Calps&Jones, a pair spoken of only in whispers- the ending by the way is epic. And so the next tale begins. :)