Oh! Cliffhanger! Ah, but it keeps the suspense. I like this story so far, and considering the small amount of Summon Night Fanfiction, I think this is one of the best in my opinion. Good work!

Finally! A Summon Night story I can both follow and enjoy. I liked how you switched the POV during the chapter to Bev. It made for a nice change mid chapter. Ah, but I'm not done. I read second chapter now.

Cough, where's this next chapter that was promised?

Hmm, i think the crew trust Gabriel too much on the herb scene.

It's the first time they seen each other and it's like;

Gabriel : Hay, that's the honas thinggie

The Rest : O, Ok, we trust you cause u looks cool, let's take this [Unknown Item] to master

At least they must ask some sort of questions like;

The Rest : Whoa? How can you tell? o_O"

'Pretty sucky', you say? I bet there's a larger group than you can imagine who just wish they could write that well...or much; whichever you think suits the situation best. Keep it up.