Excellent characterisation. Not soppy at all, it was a truly genuine piece of work...damn why did they have to die! I totally agree with you (& practicaly everyone who reviewed) Neil/Jane are a far more interesting couple than Aki/Grey! Why couldn't they have added just one little line between them before they popped it? Grr _

Awee! so cute so cute lovethe pairig xx

Wow, awesome job! Great characterization and all! And I was starting to worry that I might be the only Jane/Neil fan out there. I was practically waiting the whole movie for something to happen between them... sigh. I would love you forever if yo wrote more J/N fics!

I have to say that by far that was the best JaneNeil fic I've read.

I love this! Neil ROCKS! Jane is my favorite too. Neil and Jane! The perfect couple that was killed off, Why should Aki and Grey get so much attention, Jane and Neil are SOOOOOOOOO much more interesting! Write more about them,... PLEASE!

Hey Pisces!

Would you like to read a fanfic on what would happened if the movie had an alternative ending?

If so, be sure to check out Between Heaven and Hell.

A quick summary:

After the Phantom war and the death of Gray, Aki and the Deep Eye squadron are faced with mixed feelings for each other. Not only that, they find themselves in the middle of a controversial debate. A threat that could very well strike at the heart of every human consciousness.

Oh! This was very good! I loved it. More, please? You can never get enough Neil and Jane!

wow! that was really, really cool! i've never played ff7 so i don't know what you're referring to with the whole cloud/aeris thing, but that fic was very nicely done. _

This is soo sweet, good pov from Jane...I love this...:) Great Job! :D Write more please, Neil is one of my favs...heck, I like all the characters! ;)

It's great, now I know why Jane like Neil. Anyway, Dragonchan, have you finished cloning Neil ? 'Cause he's mine too ! NEIL IS MINE...! And, I want to get the REAL Neil not the FAKE Neil, is it a deal ?

Wo big, fat wow. For someone who doesn't write romance/angst *or* first person POV that often, you sure do it well!

Wow, very powerful! This really does sound a little like Jane, though it's hard to imagine her caring a lot about anything around her. (The movie made her and Neil really flat characters.) Oh and yes, physical activity is against my religion too.

BOOOYA! Woo! That was great! Great! It was a wonderful way of expressing exactly *why* Jane likes Neil. We need more Jane/Neil pairings. I do have one complaint, NEIL IS MINE! _ Maybe we can clone him so there's enough to share?