You seem to be portraying Freya's character well. I can imagine her thinking like this on magic.

A shame this chapter didn't really have anything happen in it. It seems to be rather random, but I guess it's a nice break from the despair and angst in the last chapter.

This looks very interesting. It's nice to see some more Freya stories on here, and this looks like it will be a great one.

That was an interesting take on events in Cleyra, and I like the descriptions of Freya's despair and cursing Fratley leaving her. I'm not sure what Beatrix meant about the princess, since she was just following Brahne's orders in Cleyra, probably believing some lies about the Burmecians threatening Alexandria or something.

Still, I'll be continuing to read this. This looks promising.

. . . Love. Lover for Freya, love for Amarant, love for all of this. Every single little piece.

Not much to say beyond that. You can do no wrong in my book.

Wow, I really enjoyed this. I get this sense that Freya's not quite sure how to be real and I love that. I think it fits her perfectly.

Absolutely loved the Jack chapter =D

It's nice to see more of this!

This most recent chapter gives Freya a bit of a clepto side, but at least she's sensible enough to return everything. It is a strange, oddly fitting idea to have her borrow bags of personality, as if she couldn't bear to carry her own.

I most enjoyed the bar scene with Jack, and his lesson on what makes a hero. That guy's always a fun character, ambiguously familiar.

These ficlets keep being fun, delightful and beautifully insightful. Great style. Blows me outta the water, this does.

Heh, this reminded me of Weeper's "Nothin' but blue skies, baby" Jack rocks! Anyway, kudos for another great chapter, looking forward to more!

These are all really amazing. You portray a vivid picture of Freya through these drabbles, and you give her character a nice amount of depth. I'm a real sucker for this kind of thing. Great work!

Glad to see this is being updated, nice chapter!

This is brilliant introspection. The first part with the fight with Beatrix was especially vivid and brutal--and poor Vivi, he was only trying to help. You could really feel the despair of losing Cleyra, and everything it suddenly meant to her.

Freya always has a lot on her plate, and it's fun to see a fic poke around her pscyhe and see what lies beneath. Really, really top-notch characterization here.
Fratley's quip about her bedroom made me smile, and gave me hope about those two. Usually FF9 fics are so dismal with that pairing.

Beautiful stuff!

Hee hee!

This fic is awesome!

Alexandria was pretty in a Disneysque way-- but it would be hard to find a good pub.

Freya's the best character in FFIX, and this is a fanfic worthy of her!

I am keeping "One should not lose themselves to night when light is beyond the trees" in my quotes file.

Terrifyingly brillant. I love Freya and can never find any good fic about her.