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Faba
2007-08-18 . chapter 1
Oh, you might make it on my Favorite authors list...
elphabathedelirious32
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Molly! I love it. Elphaba's yearbook signature, I should steal that next year. Though it's preferable to Kevin's random exhortations to kill certain political groups or exclamations of how various Communist figures kick **...oh my interesting lunch table!
omg.it's.wickedjelly
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Hah - it makes me happy when some of the "older" authors (by which I don't mean your age :^P) come around and write...stuff. Only they're *nice* stuff, such as this piece was. Is. Whatever.

I don't think I've ever seen anyone write a Wicked story centering around the concept of yearbooks, so this was obviously an original piece. And creative, yes. My only complaint is a reiteration of Pixess's - the "Fiyero:" was unnecessary and, in my opinion, sort of lessened The Mood. But only by a little bit. :^)
The Pixess
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
Very good, although you have few debatable sentence fragments, and I don't really think it needs to be labled Fiyero at the beginning, though that's just my personal opinion.

I LOVE what she wrote in the yearbook, hilarious and completely Elphie. I don't particularly think she would write "oz-speed" either, but again, my personal opinion.

All and all, nice little oneshot, I enjoyed it.

~Pixess
LostOzian
2007-06-24 . chapter 1
So like Elphaba to make a little speech about how they would never remember each other, yet Fiyero still remembers her well. Definetly Musical/Book, with the rumors that water will melt her and the references to Avaric being a student. In the musical they made him a servant; that bugs me and I haven't even finished Wicked the Book yet. Touching little oneshot- Great job! -LostOzian
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