Aha! So there WAS a chapter I had yet to review!! Yes!


Why aren't you writing anymore!?! This was one of my favorite Clerith fanfictions on this site, and you're letting it die! WHY?!? Why do you hate me?

Lovin it so far, can't wait for the next chappy! Update soon!

please finish writing this one i enjoy it so much

O, please write quickly~!

I like it and dont know what else to say.

Hurry! I wanna see more The Cry of! Please post quickly!

*Sob* Dammit, why was it so short?! *Throws another brick while crying uncontrollably* I better see the next chapter really soon, or else I'll get something a little heavier than bricks!

The cry of me...

Great Job! Update quickly!

Aww, poor Marlene! Still in character, and very well written. Hope you update soon, great job on this chapter!!

Oh, please please please please PLEZE update soon! I'm loving this fic, and so far you've kept everyone in character. Please update sooner! *Sob*

well, the plot seems interesting but as you said there are some mistakes that are a bit distracting. You could get a beta to correct them if you want :)
~Beeria