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| Sheena Dunlop 2008-03-31 ch 1,  | abuseYou totally ripped of Kingdom Hearts, lol. Not col. Be original! This very very short prologue seems a bit too middle school angsty, but poetic at the same time. so kudos on the poetry ish feel. |
| Katie B 17 2008-03-08 ch 12, | abusecool i like his chap |
| Katie B 17 2007-11-02 ch 9, | abusecool i liked it! |
| Miss. Bra 2007-10-24 ch 3, | abuseMm... Let me think... I think this chapter was a bit too rushed. She fogave him to easily and yeah... |
| Miss. Bra 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseHa, knew you knew kingdom hearts. I am so smart.. S M R T! Heh, nah, okay. Pretty good chapter, glad you told about the dream, nd yeah, I'll keep reading. -xoxbraxox |
| Miss. Bra 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseSounds good. Lol, the little 'Iv'e been having strange dreams lately' is from Kingdom Hearts. Awesome game if you've played it, or maybe you just stumbled upon then and yeah. Please don't say that you suck at summaries , it doesn't look good. The title is fine, lol, you should see the title of my story, but I like it! :). Try to make chapters a little longer. I'll keep reading! -xoxBraxox |
| everyday-snowangel 2007-10-13 ch 8, | abuseI really lyk this fic... its really kool n i really really really lyk it! its awesome... plz try n update as soon as you can... i wanna know whwat happenz next! ^^ Ja ne: ~!*everyday-snowangel*!~ |
| Katie B 17 2007-10-11 ch 8, | abusewaw just waw this story is grate! =) |
| Kei-Chan67 2007-10-05 ch 7, | abusethis is really great! UPDATE SOON! |
| noro 2007-09-30 ch 7, | abusethis story is great please update soon great work. |
| KotomiOfTheDarkness 2007-09-25 ch 7, | abusewow... |
| Katie B 17 2007-07-08 ch 3, | abusei like it a lot! plz update soon! =) |
| animefan0000012345 2007-07-07 ch 3, | abusepretty cool fic update k |
| DensLust 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abusemore please :) |
| Egypt Mesi 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseInteresting... I don't get the plot yet but I hope i will soon! Good luck and don't loose fate |