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| luermide 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is what I've been looking for. The writing is seamless; your style is well-fitting with that of Zahn. You do not make the fanfiction-error of assuming that the reader is completely familiar with the characters. The details and minor nuances are impeccable (it's clear you know the voices of each individual character). Great! |
| Rigil Kent 2008-02-13 ch 5, | abuseNice. You have a good grasp of the characters, and your extrapolation of post-T makes a lot more sense than that tripe of Kevin Anderson's. Looking forward to more! |
| I love dance 2007-10-27 ch 5, | abuseI just found this story and I LOVE it! You write everyone so well, so perfect. I'm really looking forward to more! :) |
| Majka 2007-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story and wonderful writting style, going through it was like reading one of Zahn's books, and this is the highest prise from me. Superb work, I hope You're going to write more, I will be waiting impatiently! |
| meek-bookworm 2007-08-30 ch 5, | abuseYour story is superb. The formatting is wonderful, the premise is one I've always wanted to read-Thrawn, Luke and Mara right after the Last Command- and everything seems to work. I hope you continue and finish this story- I certainly will be dissapointed if you don't. Best Wishes! |
| ppirilla 2007-07-13 ch 5, | abuseGood story. Can't wait to read more |
| Jacqueline Roget 2007-07-11 ch 5, | abusevery interesting... |
| elven-cat2 2007-07-11 ch 5, | abuseOh wow, so you are bringing in the Mystryl in on this as well huh. Hmm, that does not bode well, if they were able to get to the twins on Coruscant. OK, I expected 'Thrawn' to be a clone I guess, but I did not expect it to be 'Thrawn' pretending to be 'Thrass'. Nice twist there. Now I guess that Mara's jealosy is causing my 'danger alert' to start up with 'Shiara'. Maybe its her name resembling another 'Mata Hari' of the SW universe? Hmm, so I have to ask, is her name just coincidence? Well, this story keeps getting better, especially with your little plot twists being revealed. So I will be looking forward to your next update. |
| ginchy-amanda 2007-07-10 ch 5, | abuseSorry I'm late (here)! DRL has been kicking my butt! This story is always a lovely diversion, however. Now if we could just get you a contract with Del-Rey to erase all their sins... ;) I love how you're weaving this all together--it promises to be a great ride! As always, I can't wait for the next chap! :D |
| Chisscientist 2007-07-08 ch 5, anon. | abuseInteresting, and getting complicated. |
| moonservant 2007-07-08 ch 5, | abusePlease say it's not a clone! I don't like clones.. they're kind of loopy... Another excellent chapter! Great job! Please update asap! |
| shann1 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseAnother excellent chapter! I noticed you spelling Thrawn's name Thraawn despite his conviction to being the real one...another trick like with Thrass or the real deal? I like your twists. |
| kiku65 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseA clone. I am shamed. Why didn't I think of that? |
| bkwrm 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseI really love this story! I bet the Mistryl with the twins is Shada, isn't it? |
| Dana Skywalker 2007-07-07 ch 5, | abuseOh no...poor Leia. And Karrde...and just about everyone. Lol. I love how the scene with Mara sprinting right towards Luke was in Leia's vision, but in reality, she wasn't planning on hurting him. I mean, how could she? ;) Great update! This chapter turned out really well :) Dana |