About episode 8, when will it be OUT?!?!?!

Lonai's cute, and the other OCs are really well-rounded and well placed. . . I love OCs! ^^ Yours are pretty well done. . . I'll be waiting for your next work! ^_^

Keep it up! XD

HALLELUIA!! IM BACK!! XD i been so busy with school and i so missed your story! i was thinking and hopped on and praised the almightyness that is Chrono Crusade! I am so unbeliveably happy to read your story, it's getting so interesting too!

oh, COME ON! You were just starting to get into the writing spirit, and it's been over three months since the last update. Can't you try to continue? PLEASE?!

~~Nya!! *glomps* Be kind and give me more violence!! More chapters! More Lonai! Azmaria and the gang! More chocolate! More people staring down the barrel of a loaded steel-tipped iron gun! Give me more chapters!! *author pushes off* NOO!! THE PANCAKES! THEY SHALL EAT ME! LOOK AT THEM, WITH THEIR METALLIC EARLOBE, PLASTIC CHAIRS AND SOUVINIER SHOPS! *audience: Dear God, does she ever stop?? -.-;* NO! WAH! BOO! *curls up in a ball, singing Row, row, row your boat* (Everyone is all like: O.o) XDD More chapters or my insanity shall increase!

Hi! I really love this story! Lonai's awesome! Please do your best to update soon! ^^

oh...*looks intrigued*

KAWAII DEMON GIRL IS SO POSSESIVE!HA!GET IT POSSES
EVEN IF ITS SPELT WRONG DRAWS A LAUGH>*sinckers*

ya...sorry if this review is not as energetic as usual...my fuinny bone just took a turn for the worse...^^;

ANYWAY!!*claps hands happily*
UPDATE PLEASE!!*flings self at you and won't let go* IF U DO NOT UPDATE YOU'LL NEVER GET RID OF ME!!
*pauses dramatically*

for i am...A PARASITE!HAHAHA!
*accidently lets go falling to the floor*

OWIE!*cries hysterically*
IT HURTS IT HURTS!IT HURTS!
*pause*

Please update...*tugs on your sleeve repeatedly*
(saki: i don't think that'll make her update any faster..^^;)

way to kill my hopes...*pouts*

^^ A lovely new chapter! I could tell you every little thing I liked about it, but that would take a really long time, so. ^^ I bet - Lonai seems like she's a lot of fun to write (she's definitely fun to read). I love reading this, and I can't wait for more chapters! (There's a couple little grammatical issues - missing commas, that kind of thing. ^^ I could take over for your missing beta reader, if you'd like, but you'd have to send me the chapters before you put them up. I'd be happy to do it!)

*blink**blink**blank look*
part...ner...but isn't Michael Azzies partner...is it gonna be like a threesome...
of partners...*mock glares* what were u thinking...*snickers*

ANYWAYS!KAWAII DEMON GIRL IS ICKEYS NIECE!HA!I LOVED THE WHOLE...

"but i wish she was my sister"

thing...you made me cack up laughing hysterically at that part lol...

ANYWAY!
*waves pickets sign*
UPDA...*pause*

LE GASP WHERE DID MY CLONE ARMY GO!
*falls to knees in a dramatic way*

DAMN YOU STAR WARS!DAMN YOU!

*sees Loni*

OH SO KAWAAII!*hugs her*

(loni: LET ME GO YOU FILTHY BEAST!*thrashes about*)

*lets her go...only to get kicked in the kne*
OWIE!
*sobs*


PLEASE!UPDATE SON!^_^*gives puppy dog eyes before sobbing again*

Yay, new chapter! Twists! Turns! And "we just want to hug you" - that was hilarious. ^^ I'd say poor Lonai, except, you know, not really. And, um, I guess I can try to read it again and find things that are wrong. ^^

Yay! Another chapter! ^^ Lonai's kind of funny, even though she's so mean. And poor Azmaria - I can almost visualize her running around in circles, trying to figure out which way to go first. ^^ I'm sorry it was giving me errors, too - I couldn't read the chapter for so long! And I hate having to wait for that backstory - but I bet it'll be worth it when it finally comes along.

lol...Things really are getting interesting though..i've now got this strange image of a little 5 year beating up a grown man...muscles and all*snickers* you sure do wonders with imagery...lol

Please update soon!*waves picket sign* gotta make this more effective*randomly clones self multiple times* HAHAHA!!The wolf army will rule earth!HAHA!*pause* but for now...

WHAT DO WANT (Wolf clones: UPDATES!) WHEN DO WANT THEM!(wolf clones: NOW!!)lol...

Yay! A new chapter! For some reason, was returning errors instead of this chapter until this morning, which is why I'm so late getting here. ^^ Anyway. This chapter's brilliant, of course, and despite the fact that I've never seen the ending of Chrono Crusade, the bit with Azmaria at the end made me get all teary. And that was an interesting bit of backstory for Michael and Lonai - don't worry! ^^ You're making me wish that summer would go faster so that I can have the next bit, which is just weird. ^^

^_^
YAY!YOU'VE UPDATED!*does happy dance*
i wonder though...i can't qute work out whats up with the kawaii demon girl...O.o;

is she evilly good...or evilly bad?
Its kinda funny how she gets so jealous!^^;

keep up the good work ya!^_^
*gives puppy dog eyes*
Please Update!

OMG sorry sometimes I shorten things that I type it's supposed to be "beta reader". I really want to know what Michael's connection with Lonai is... my friend keeps saying "contractor! contractor!" but i don't know... I'm so anxious!
About the beta reading, go to my account thing and send me your password in private messages. I'm so looking forward to the next chappie!! >.< *glomp*