LOL. Sammy's got a kitty, Sammy's got Kittycat. I guess that answers the killing people thing, right:-)

If not a werewolf, then maybe a werecat, a jaguar-were-cat? Hope Dean doesn't go around, killing people 'cause that would really mess him up. Or if Sam was put in the position to kill him...

Are you texan, so you know about the food?

Yeah, very mature, janking the blankets and pillows away...

Since a jauar isn't native in Texas, I guess it has some meaning. Also the dirt on the bed.

LOL Don't we just love Dean at his best. Sammy is sweet but can be such a joy-killer when it comes to flirting. The fic feels more and more like a real episode to me.

Suspense is building. It's always nice to be able to read on right away, hehe. Watch on too, BTW. I cameacross Internet Supernatural after they begun season four so it made some very long, nice hours of watching without any cliffhanger *grin* I don't mind the upcoming, since it means we get a fifth season:-)

I love it how you call the Impala 'Baby' not Dean's Baby. As if it's her name. Let's face it, she's the third main chara of the show (Besides the brotherly bond).

You have a very picturesque way to describe the motel rooms, surroundings and persons. It's easy to 'see' them

That was a totally awesome story! And by the way I think you completely nailed Sam and Dean's personalities. This was really well writen. Thanks. Can't wait to read more of Heart of the City.

Wow, this is a lovely fic. I like the use of Mayan mythology, it's unusual. Dean as the jaguar - very interesting, it suits him. The story flowed nicely, and the interaction between Sam and Dean rings true. It does read like an episode, with the intial mystery, the investigation, and the interaction between the brothers. Greak work. :)

Awesome story,totally episode worthy and I totally loved it!

Hi, read rec on yahoo group for Jess and decided to start with this one first. I really enjoyed this story! Liked the mythology angle.

Awesome job. Very beautifully written. I loved Dean as a jaguar. Catch ya on the flip side.

What a wonderfully complex, well-told story. Loved the characterizations, the atmosphere and the tone. Also enjoyed how "unbiased" it was (this coming from a clearly biased fic-writer!). . . how balanced it was between Dean and Sam. I was particularly fond of the use of humor - so like an episode. The museum scenes had me laughing even *before* we met Dean's latest admirer. Very well done and I hope you'll find time to write more Supernatural fic while working on your pro-fic. I look forward to it!

i really liked this...great job =)

Excellent story, well written. Looking forward to the next chapters and hoping there will be many more!