Shweet! I love this story. I never bothered reading the first version, though, so I'll have to see where this goes now... The first version was too choppy for my liking. I'm glad you made this one, otherwise I never would have looked at this fanfiction, no offense. The fangirl/boy thing was hillarious. And Orois' story was way interesting, as was his appearance. Keep up the good writing, m'kay. I hope to see an update soon. Awesome story.

Heh, awsome work. I also read the original version too. As for chapter eight (I hope I'm not too late to point this out) Ooris ended up in our world during the events of Reuini(sp?) Kenshin which if memory serves me correctly was set during the Meji Era in the 19th century, so Ooris was in our world for less than 200 years. More please can't wait! :)

This would deffiently be a dream come true for all ToS fans, like me.
Oh man I laughed so ** the fangirl attack scene. Poor Kratos...Keep up the excelent work! *gives two thumbs up*

Well, you've definitely made improvements on this chapter with the flashbacks Kratos has in his mind. Especially since Orois is the main attention to this chapter. The flashbacks are well described and the Orois' purpose for wanting to kill Kratos so badly for the death of this brother along with the village. But no matter how much I see it, the part for when Kratos has his own bad portrait of his face like his son while being posted on a wanted poster. In any case, who would have thought that his own body would be responsible for causing the amplification of the group's magic just by being near them. Well, in any case, I'm sure that the next chapter would be filled with some craziness along the way and I'm not just saying that. Later!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

Aw... crap! There better be more of this...

Haha. the Fangirls killed me.

"Krattie-Sama!"

-snicker-

I've read the original version of this, and honestly, I'd forgotten how funny it was. It really made me laugh. Revising it was a good idea, as the story does flow much better. Keep it up! I'll be sure to read the next chapter when you get it up~

Well, I've got to say that this update came faster than I originally hoped for. In any case, here's the reviews.

The chapter has definitely been through some changes since I last saw it and it seems that you've really thought this out well. What with most of the changes done to it regarding your OC characters and the ToS gang hanging out in the mall. And in my opinion, the way that Raine sounds around the girls when shopping is like the way she sounds for when she goes crazy about finding ruins or new technology. But no matter how improved that this chapter is, it never ceases to cause me to laugh while reading. Especially since both Kratos and Yuan are both the targets of the ToS Fangirls world way(Nation wide in this case) while, in my opinion, Sheena would be every male would want(with Raine being second, of course). The fangirls mobbing over over those two angels is something that I can't get enough of.

But, to be honest, it would have been nice if this scene had a little extra scenes added to it like Lloyd accidently learning of dental plans or something. But it's still good nonetheless. I just hope that the next chapter would be less predictable. This chapter nearly got me hyped to continue with my own project. I just lack the drive to do it. Well, later!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

Well, I've got to say that it's good that you've got your muse back. I mean, from the way that this chapter has been upgraded, it was worth the wait. In any case, on with the review.

Now, from what I could see, it would appear that the ToS gang are just getting the grasp of the concept of fangirls. Man, I still feel sorry for Kratos for when both Aaron and Kyle had to demonstrate on what they mean. With the others, it seems that you went to a lot of work with describing on how Yuan's machine works to the other half of the group. And boy, when they arrive to our world, whew! I could tell that disaster is on the horizon. Especially for when Aaron's older sister has arrived on the scene unexpectedly.

All in all, I'm glad that you are able to update this story. For a moment, I thought that you are going to forget all about it. But I'm wondering what is it that drives you to move forward with this story? I'm curious because I too am suffering from major lack of inspiration and drive. Well, later!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

This is interesting please update soon!

Wo! The fangirls are coming! And I'm leading the lot-I mean, NOT going to stalk-I mean uh..crap..Look! It's the toaster from hell! (TM) *points and flees*
Toaster: *sits and does nothing as it is an ordinary toaster*

Man, are the ToS characters on Earth going to have a hard time for when it comes to dealing with fangirls. I still feel sorry for Kratos when the fangirls start chasing him with their eyes locked on him like rattle snakes. I swear, the old angel seems to attract the attention of the fangirls without even trying. Hell, he could just attract the attention of the girls just by sitting in a chair and doing nothing and the ladies would just come crawling. In any case, it's a good improved chapter that you've put up. I know that most of the material that you've put up is the same, but I could never get enough. The gag with Kratos vs. the Toaster is something that I could never get enough of. That and the fact that Yuan had to make Botta to say that password is something that got me out of my seat laughing. I can't wait for the next chapter to be here. It was certainly worth the wait on this one.

On a final note, I've saw the changes that you've done to your first chapter of Light and Darkness. I didn't get the chance to read it because I've been busy catching up on other works. But what I can tell you is that when your second chapter shows up, you'll bet that I'll be putting up a very long review on both chapters. That's all that I have to say. Well, keep up the good work on the improvements and remember a saying that I've now lived by: "If you want something to be done, treat it like your homework assignment. But when it comes to doing fanfictions, have fun and enjoy writing." Later!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

“Raine…loose…in our dimension…in my house…”
Ah, that line gets me every time. Way to make a great fic better man! Keep em up!

I'm glad that you decided to update, man. I've also liked with what you've done with chapter 3. Man, did everyone have a hard time trying to get Raine to calm down after she went after Arron's house like a female dog in heat. Sorry about the joke, but it's true you know. In any case, do both Arron and Kyle have their hands full with trying to get things under control with half of the ToS characters in their world.

Back in Symphonia, it seems Colette always find ways of getting herself in trouble whether she means to or not. Not to mentiont he fact that both Sheena and Zelos always seems to make a good comedy couple when it comes to causing trouble with one another. Man, it's very good those two arguing always make me laugh. Well, it's a good improvement to the chapter. I hope that you keep up the good work. Later!

Maurice A. Nigma

I'll try to make this as brief as I can. All that I could say for this chapter is an improvement to the original. I've read your fic for like the 6th time and I couldn't get enough. I've liked with how you've improved on how Raine tried to explain the origin of the creations of their world from Martel to the Summon Spirits. I'm also glad that you've added a few lines to the characters just as they've arrived in our world. But what I like the most is the way Raine went psycho for when it comes to studying our technology. Man, I wouldn't want to be Arron and Kyle right now for when she gets her hands on an Ipod or Playstation 2 system. In any case, you did good on improving the chapter and I hope that you put in chapter 3 soon. I can't wait to see what other improvements you've made on it.

On a final note, I would like to add that I think that the way Raine acts around finding something new and exciting like when a woman would act for when she...well, never mind. Oh, and I'm glad that I was of help to you by giving you that advice. Were you just having fun with your first version of the story? I could tell that you just wanted to have some things out of your mind before you went any further. Well, later!

Maurice A. Nigma

I'd hate to have Raine dismantling everything in my house...goodbye Wii..PC...PS2...that'd suck. Great chapter!