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| skyz 2007-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was great. I could see this being the scene to lead up to their meet up at The Dot. Marco's a busy body but you gotta love him. |
| Alexz6 2007-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was soo cute!! you should do a pov during their actual coffee date and totally go off on it for what happens later. i think you could pull it off, please? |
| They-Call-Me-Orange 2007-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseI keep trying to think of things to say about this but I've been drawing blanks since I opened this review box thingy five minutes ago. I seem to have that problem with your stuff. I think it's all great writing in general, really. Loved the Marco/Paige-ness. Loved the Palex. Loved... everything. It's always really cool to see stuff from Paige's POV - especially when it's believable. But, I think this trancends "believable" and went straight to Better-Than-The-Writers-Could-Ever-Hope-For. I can't think of anything more to say that won't make me sound ilke a gushing fool or a redundant idiot I'll end this review here. Fantastic work. -Orange |
| Halfreck3929 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abusepaige had this courage from like nowhere! |
| issarged 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI love these deleted scene fics. And this seriously makes me wish that this had been a scene. It would have been great to see Paige trying to call Alex. |
| radiance x 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseAw. You write Paige so well. This was sweet, and a nice little deleted scene to have as WFTW left me a little disappointed (even if timeline wise Palex is way past that). |