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z-Madness-z
2009-11-24 . chapter 9
It's like a ninja genocide, huh? Tsk, tsk, tsk. Hope you're proud of yourself because not only did you kill THREE bishies, but you killed KIBA, too.

LOVE. THIS. STORY. Some spelling mistakes and I think a few grammar, too. But nonetheless, a GREAT story.
z-Mandess-z
2009-11-24 . chapter 8
FT! YOU KILLED NEJI! Well, I guess you killed Sasuke, Naruto, and Sai, too. I've never read a fanfiction like this, lol.

Love this crossover. All the other ones on FF are really... suckish. This is THE best.
bookworm51485
2009-04-12 . chapter 7
I'd personally vote for SaiNaru. SasuNaru is WAY too numerous and Sasuke is WAY too much of an a-hole to deserve Naruto. Rarely ever get my way though because unless the author is firmly decided on the pairing they've chosen, a non-SasuNaru pairing, the SasuNarutards (I put an emphasis on the 'tards part :D) are so numerous that those of us with the sense enough to see the SasuNaru is not the end all be all of pairings and that, honestly, Naruto's way too good for Sasuke, have no chance of countering their bullying behavior. Anyways, sorry, rant over. I know the story's already complete so this really won't make a difference but I just wanted to put in my support for a SaiNaru pairing anyways.
Hmob1994
2009-01-03 . chapter 11
That's the end? Seriously?
But...
But...
*Sniff*
Fine, I'll take part in your stupid poll!
That is, if u haven't already started the sequel... or finished it for that matter...
Hmob1994
2009-01-03 . chapter 9
woah woah woah woah... Are you just gonna kill off everyone in Konoha and build a a new little Ninja world in Seireitei?
Lol, but it's still good... I kinda feel bad for all of them...
shogi
2008-10-30 . chapter 11
Ah, that was very good! I really enjoyed it! There were a few grammatical errors... you wrote 'way' as 'why' a lot or maybe the computer ate it? LOL It happens.
Anyways, that was the only thing that really bothered me since it kind of confused the sentence! Well, ME and the sentence... :D
Going on, I wish I'd been reading this earlier since I would like to make my own comments about the pairings: I don't particularly like Sai at all so I really don't like him in a pairing with Naruto and while Sasuke is alright (in a way) I think in the context of your story he and Naruto shouldn't be together either. Actually I HAD thought you were aiming for an Ichigo/Naruto but... that idea was knocked out when Naruto slept with Toushiro. Who, getting to the point here, I feel should be the one with Naruto for this...
Well... honestly, this is just my opinion and this IS your story so please take a look at this and maybe consider it (are you doing a poll, btw?) and I will be seeing you in the sequel!
Lille Venn
2008-10-12 . chapter 11
Interesting story, I liked it. I saw the first chapter of the sequel is up, I'll read that afterwards. But first I well say something over this story.

First, I was a little irritated that Naruto at once called himself Namikaze Naruto and ditched the Uzumaki name. Because Uzumaki, if I'm not mistaken, is the surname of his mother, (why he have his mothers name insted of his father i dont understand, but then again he probably would have made the connection in the actual series that Yondaime Hokage was his father if they had had the same surname) and I dont think he should ditch his mothers name just because he found his father. (Where is his mother anyway? I don't know if she is dead but if she is shouldn't she be in soul society too?)
But then I understand that if he was still Uzumaki Naruto and not Namikaze's son, then I guess Sasuke would have found out about him sooner.

And then I belive It's Uchiha Madara, not Marada. And i think you wrote Tamari in the ninja chapter, but I belive it is Temari.

I think you've been very inventive with the names and shapes of zanpaktous (did I write that right?) and such, and the too Akatsuki brothers. You're good!

The fact that Naruto and Sasuke didn't find Gaara and Shikamaru when they found Kiba and Itachi, worries me. Please dont make them Hollows! Sakura is enough. Dont let that happen to Gaara and Shikamaru too.

And I'm glad you made Itachi switch side, seeing his not that evil, Madara is.

Shinigami goes to the living world to kill hollows right? Their job is to protect people right? so what's stopping them from going to Naruto's world and sort out Akatsuki and their deamons? Is it because the tailed beasts are deamons, not hollow?

As for the sequel...
I hope Shikamaru and Gaara are not hollows
I hope Akamaru shows up despite the fact that I don't think dogs go to soul society=P
I want to know how Minato got the Namikaze Estate
I want to know if Minato went looking for Kushina (that's Naruto's mother's name, right?) if she died and ended up in soul society like Minato.
I want Ichigo and Renji to shout at each other like they use to, if Renji comes back.
I'm quite a fan of Karin, Yuzu, Isshin and the people at Urahara Store, I hope they're alright? (but then again I guess they're not important for your story)

As for who Naruto is going to end up with, I have no idea. I just have to say that I don't like Sai, so if the to end up together, I guess I'll grumble a little.

That was quite a review, Sorry for the length, it seems I just can't make it short and concise.

Anyway, keep up the good work!
Sabishii Kage Tenshi
2008-09-25 . chapter 11
Interesting.. =) I hope Naruto will be with Toushiro in the sequel. =)
Angel'sMystery
2008-09-23 . chapter 11
I love your story! i cant wait to read the sequel! Also, the plot is interesting and i liked that you did not make the fic like 20+ chapters long...but actually kept short, and are thinking about a sequel.
lilsilverphoenix
2008-09-07 . chapter 11
I think naruto should leave past love in the past. i can't really see naruto with sai b/c there personality doesn't really clash well together and sasuke cause to much pain in the past.
I vote for Hitsugaya. it will be interesting to see how they try to built a relationship together.
Saiou-chan
2008-09-01 . chapter 11
*is blushing so much from reading the first AN* Um, your welcome, that's a first for me too. No one has ever been that happy I reviewed. As for having your babies, I don't know, I'm a girl, so if your a guy...*bangs head on desk* WHAT THE HELL AM I THINKING?! *hits her head more* BAD SAIOU-CHAN! GET YOUR MIND OUT OF THE GUTTER! OK ok, I'm fine, but your welcome to email me if you so choose, my email is (no that is not a typo). I hope the sequel is up soon, I'd like to see the pairings. But I'll put a vote in too SasuNaru, ByakuIchi. I like Byakuya as seme, he doesn't strick me as someone who will bottom willingly.
FumetsuKaji
2008-08-29 . chapter 11
Nice wrap up. I cant wait for the sequel!
Chibi Tsuki Hikari
2008-08-25 . chapter 10
*_* omg I've never found a yaoi Bleach/Naruto crossover it's like a dream come true. The only think I'm a bit confused on is you never really gave any backround on why sakura became a anacar(sp?) I mean I can totally see Orochimaru as one but Sakura? I need a lil explianation for her. Not that I mind I don't really like her that much lol. Oh and I love that Shiro-chan and Naruto slept together xD I hope Shiro was top ^^ Naruto's just the perfect uke. ^^ I love GaaNaru, SasuNaru, ShikaNaru, and everyone naruto thats male xD with him as the bottom. Oh And I did know about the first name being the seme and the second being the uke! *so eats the cookie you offered* ^-^ I can't wait to see who gets Naruto in the end. I love this fanfic it's freakin awesome, thanks for uploading it! Oh and I'm confused about one thing, where the hell is renji? xD

~*Chibi-Chan*~
Saiou-chan
2008-08-20 . chapter 10
Is this going to be an Byakuya/Ichigo oventally? I'm confused. @@; Also you might want to do some heavy editing on this puppy, the story is good, there are some grammer errers that take away from it. One is that this whole thing feels like a run-on sentance, there are no commas or puntuations of any sort. Also, anytime some speaks you start a new paragraph, unless it's the same person talking. There is a few missplaced words here and there, but that is as far as it goes.
If you fix all these, your story will run alot smoother, and be much easier to read. Keep on going, you have a jewel in the makeing here.
anastrianna
2008-08-18 . chapter 10
i love the story
but i dont review because i am dislexsick sorry for the bad spelling
ps pleas put rock lee in the story hes my fav from naruto
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