another great chapter keep up the good work

Excellent. Sounds a lot like the official novelization of what Wolverine went through when he was weapon X, so it does fit Laura. Good job.

Thank you for writing good spider-man fiction. Recently I've finally stopped angsting and seething and frothing (You get the idea, I'm exaggerating a little.) over the "one more day" spider-man comic book arc and was I am once again a true believer. I still don't like Joe Quisada or current Spider-man stories, but they aren't going to last forever. Your story will be remembered more fondly although that isn't much an accomplishment what is is that you stayed true to the spirit of a loving, brooding, responsible, friendly neighborhood Spider-man. So far you kept it amazing and spectacular, the ultimate fanfiction type of experience, and hopefully the comics will follow suit. As a favor can Spidey have some limelight in the next chapter of your story? So far it's a lot of other people's pov.

very nice.

great work, all I can say is keep writing

Wow, this updates fast. You're awesome!

female stalker ftw? and a female wolverine no less... XD

another great chapter keep up the good work

John Stewart? Where?

Interesting, that's pretty clever stating the differences in thier web-slinging like that. And then the whole you recognize, just not remember part was good too. I wonder if that'll come in to play again later.

So the Spiders finally meet the Freya and her brother. Wow, Jessica is becoming a person of interest to a lot of people, but what happened at the end has me scratching my head on what happened, why would physical contact set off that kind of reaction? And just who was that guy at the end? My only guess is someone like Mephisto.

Your Ultimatizing character is a (great)female character you were just introduced to, so they may be lesser known... I haven't got a clue who you got planned, but I look forward to finding out.

Slingers! It's not Prodigy, Ricochet, Hornet, and Dusk, but it's still cool seeing the name in action again.

Nice. The Knights arc. Sorry, I didn't notice the second time that I already left a review asking for it. But this is wish fulfillment for me, so thanks even if it wasn't intentional. Also, you continue to pile on the intrigue. What will Jessica's hobby be? Will she slap Flash? What will flash say to Gwen? One thing that bothers me about spider-woman in the continuities I'm familiar with is that she's weaker than spider-man. Aren't female spiders supposed to be stronger? I hope I see it evened out in this story but it doesn't look like it's going in that direction after the fight with Shocker. Was that a fluke? And the Carnage creature, that has to get interesting when provoked by Wilson Fisk.

Wow. Intense. I'm hooked even if this story dies. You are a good writer.

Probably the best advice Jessica’s got yet, hopefully it’ll stick.

A reference to Steven Strange Sr.! Haven’t seen one of those in a while from the Ultimate Universe. You really have me starting to wonder just what these two kids’s deal is.

So you are gonna do the Knightfall arc. Well, it’s gonna be interesting with the two new players. And nice shot at The Super Hero Squad(Man that shows awful).

Still looking for that perfect Ultimate character? Well, since you are doing Knightfall, I think my previous suggestion of Luke Cage would work. I still have a couple more heroes I can suggest, but I’m running out of ideas.

1. Prowler, aka Hobie Brown. He hasn’t shown up yet in the Ultimate Universe except for being on a list of burglars, which is kind of surprising. I mean, he’s not the biggest supporting Spidey character, but he still shows up from time to time to help out, like the time he lent him his hoverpack for Spidey’s temporary Hornet identity.
2. One of the many other Spider-people, only not a clone this time. There’s a good amount to choose from, such as Spider-Woman II(and later Arachne) Julia Carpenter; Spider-Man enthusiast Mattie Franklin(Spider-Woman I) who got her powers in the Gathering of Five Ritual; Arana(aka Anya Corazon), a spider-person of a different design; and Madam Web, the wise old telepathic guide.
3. This is more of a combo guest appearance suggestion here, Spider-Man 2099(Miguel O’hara), Spider-Man 2211(Dr. Max Borne), and Spider-Girl(May “Mayday” Parker, Pete and MJ’s future daughter in the MC2 universe). For some reason Spider-People from all over time have to gather and fight a common threat, maybe some sort mystic enemy like Shathra or Mourlun(two of the people Spidey fought when he explored the mystical side of his powers a few years ago in the 616 universe). Just imagine the crazyness of several Spider-Heroes from all over time having to work together.

really cool, can't wait for the next chapter. i love how your mixing X-23 into this fic, although i think logan's reaction to her was way off character, he's like a father/brother to her in the mainstream universe. i'd still prefer her to hang with the spider family, but logan could have tried to be a part of her rehabilitation into the lab free world.

speaking of the spider family, if you're looking for a team name i'd suggest the 'Slingers.' a couple years ago during the "identity crisis" story arc peter had to temporarily give up being spider-man and created four new costume's and names for four new hero's which he alternated using. once he was back to being spider-man he discarded the new costumes and later a group of teenagers started to use them all as a group called the Slingers. although peter was never a member of this team and spider-man never had any interaction with them, the name slingers could still work, especially if all the team members are web-slingers.

Great story, you describe perfectly how messed up jessiaca is and the baffled reaction of the knigths on Spider-mans "teammates" will surly be hilarious.

As for new household members, how about She-Hulk, just as a teenager?

Or the Ghost Rider, as far as I know the original did not have a spezific alter ego, so it could be any kind of teenager who accidently mad a treatsy with the devil.

Blarg Deadpool. Apparently not...

Expanding more on the Carnage/Venom deal would be interesting. Even though they were created by Peter's Dad, they could still have alien origins? Also, a certain cat-burglar hasn't been around for a while...