Oh This fic made me cry and laugh.
I'm just a sucker for happy endings.

Kohako_Shadow

Very sweet in the end.

Thank you for writing it!

I loved this story a lot. Some interesting ideas in this and I especially love the bullet proof vest at the end!

Wonderful look at Ezra and just how far he will go to protect a child. He really has a soft spot for children and I'm sure the idea that he wasn't able to protect the little girl was just eating him up. Loved the twist in the end and I'm glad that Chris and Nathan were there for him. The bear is priceless and now is better protected; the vest was adorable. Thanks for posting this and I hope you have more Mag 7 fic in the works.
(More stories, please!)

This was a wonderfully, entertaining short story. Great use of angst, h/c and just the right touch of humor packed into a FINISHED story. I enjoyed reading it. Alot. Way to go. Keep it up.

Aw, this is just too cute and sweet! You had me scared to death taht little girl was dead and Ezra was blaming himself and gonna go off the deep end. *heaves huge sigh of relief*

Hi,

Just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your story. Hope to be reading more of your stuff soon.

Mimi

Way to go, Ezra! ATF flak jacket and all!! The absolute horror of that moment is something he will live with forever. I am glad he got to see her ok. Great story!

I absolutely loved this story! What a clever plot. How beautifully written. My favorite line... "Well, damn, isn't that something." (When Ezra realized he'd been shot.) Bravo! More please!

I loved this story then and I love it still! I am glad that you posted it here! I always loved the surprise that she wasn't shot and then the ending with the little vest!