yeah, another chapter! It's a bit less confusing now, and it's really capturing my attention! Can't wait for an update!
Shadowed ice

Sorry I didn't review earlier. I was busy with my own story. Sorry again! It was an...interesting chapter. What shall happen next?

Again, nice chapter. It's slightly confusing at the moment, but I think that might just be me. I like the use of different words in place of words we commonly use, it adds a little more...intrest to the story. Great chapter, hope you update soon,
Shadowed ice

Great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next.

...That was pretty neat. I liked it. It definatly catches your attention. Plus, nobody really does stuff on the matorn, so that's another bounus to the story. Can't wait for an update!
Shadowed ice