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| JesusWillSave 2007-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI love your story so much I added to my favs! Update soon! |
| theultimatewebhead 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseWell I already reviewed it on the forum but I might as well post the same thing here so other people can see it it was pretty awesome, like I said first chapters are always the hardest, and that was good. I loved Edgar, “He killed my parents over some chips..." and everyone stayed in character, keep up the good work! |