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theYellowDello
2009-12-24 . chapter 1
so, that's it?
What a terrible cliff-hanger of an ending. It's got so much potential.
Ninja Shen
2009-11-16 . chapter 1
so... there will be more, right?
DreamIdol
2009-11-09 . chapter 1
It's quite impressive!! I really love the story. The characters stayed with in the original. It kept my attention and kept me wanting to read more and more. I really love your story and it made my long day a little more relaxing. I hope to be able to read more of your amazing story... Hopefully there's also another part to this story I'm kinda iching to know what happens in the drama. Keep up the great work! Your officially one of my favorite.
Anonymous
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
Hm, of the over 30 SkipBeat FanFics I’ve chosen to read, you are the only person I have reviewed for as of yet.

I like how you emphasized each person’s characteristics without going over board. For example, many of the FanFics that I’ve read seem to have Kyoko do about 2-5 dogezas for ONE apology. That’s a bit much. =p However, having her sneak around to avoid Ren seems more real to her character.

The plot, for the most part, seems likely. I say “for the most part” because I don’t know how the story is going to turn out. Thus, things that seem out of place could really be logical.

I really do hope you continue this story. It would be a waste not to.
Debbie Lynn Cooperrider
2009-10-19 . chapter 1
M.O.R.E.! please :)
Akaru-chan
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
Update? -depressed- please?
Hidden Relevance
2009-09-20 . chapter 1
Oh man this never went any further? but it's seriously fantastic!

Man.. I'll have to add you to my alert list regardles... I really hope you decide to come back to it some day!
VampsMoonAngel
2009-07-24 . chapter 1
That was awsome but in a way a bit too dramatic... unless u wanted it to seem that way then you've done a good job. Please get the secound chapter up and running soon since im not that patient so... post or die... ^.^
Slavaskia
2009-06-25 . chapter 1
I like this story...Director Shingai's character is not given much attention in the anime or in the manga, so reading this first chapter really makes me excited to read the continuation! Please continue this story~!!
Sillvog
2009-06-22 . chapter 1
This was really long, but well worth the time reading it. But I do have one question, where's chapter 2!?!?!?!?!? I'm not sure how long it will take you to update this, but I'll be on the look out for it till it does. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Lady Light
2009-06-05 . chapter 1
Love it! please update soon!
LaughingAngelsGibberish
2009-05-20 . chapter 1
I really like it so Please post the 2nd chapter!
yuki
2009-05-14 . chapter 1
I thought this was very good story that clearly demonstrated the thought and planning necessary to write a novela, or so it seems from what has been written and your plans for a long second chapter.
I think the only things that deserves a comment, other than the fantastic loyalty to the character and very creative scenario, is the sense of mystery. Through out the story many events happen but many of them leave you wondering what really happened.
Especially with the TV show that they watched having dinner. It seemed that sho wrote a song about how he and Kyouko left for tokyo, but it was left completely in the air. Another mystery was why Yashiro-san wasn't with Ren in Hokaido. Along with the fact that Kyouko had the script of Second Chance before the meeting that Moko-san couldn't make. At first that seemed a little implausible.
But other than leaving to much mystery for the reader to figure out, but which is necessary to keep the reader in suspense. I wondered at the fact that Kyouko would stop working as an actress for such a long period of time to help the director. That seemed too odd, especially since Kyouko would probably feel even more motivate to work hard looking at Sho's success.
In general, this is a lovely story and also the most complete fanfic I have read for skip beat. I also liked how you included character that we saw very early in the series but then didn't see again, the director and how you included very realistic new characters. I look forward to reading the next installment.
Keoi
2009-05-10 . chapter 1
D: It's been so long, have you abandoned this fanfic?? T_T
Serara
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
Absolutely amazing.
I have never been so engrossed in a fanfic before. Everyone felt completely, perfectly in character, even your original characters felt comfortable and in place. I am absolutely in love with this story!
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