so kawai!

YOU ACTUALLY HAVE A GAKUEN ALICE FIC! omg i love you!

Well, your story plot is pretty good, but at the end of this chapter it says, THE Hyuuga Neji, but then Mikan says, maybe Natsume Hyuuga isn't so bad. That doesn't make sense if it's Neji that made the warning... Just thought you'd like to know.

love it ill review if every chapter is this great!

Please update your story as soon as you can. I like it very much!

Be Patient. Write more and see as your reviews increase.

-But I think this is the perfect time to maybe inform/question you that are you not writing for the Joy of it? I mean, the joy have writing a fanfiction, if not well, why are you? You shouldn't base your values on your reviews but on your own amusement on your own story; but be patient; reviews will come with time, the more you write; Two Chapters: You can't expect much; let you story roam a bit around the Fanfiction world.

Anyways, after saying that...may I add, what an interesting plot; if not a bit worrisome because I'm a very big fan of sister-brother complexs'...but I'm looking foward...to an update, maybe?

Anways, Good Luck with your story;

A Posse Ad Esse,

S. F.

your plot is quite good...

although i'm not really a fan of naruto...

i guess this story is pretty thrilling...hehe

so plz update soon...

ja ne

gakkuri

Good story

can't wait till next chapter!

even though I only kno naruto it's interesting!

im damn reviewing. lol it was ok, but it needs more description, needs to be a bit longer, and not so quick to talking. it wasn't half bad tho! :D

d2 lang sa may samin kc town fiesta so no classes...

we...

im so lucky sometimes...

anyways...

add mu aq sa ym seeing as your online...

Maya_Orihara13...

mas madami kc magreply

wait who is naruto goin out with

and is mikan and them have alices

and u knoe i never thoguht of sasuke and sakura goin out because i saw shippudden and naruto and sakura were gettin along good

Oh my go- .::pukes::. I canNOT believe that you just wrote that! OH MY EFFIN'- .::runs away::.

wahahaha! nice one!

P you ha! putting my name in it!

I didnt imagine you would put naruto character in the story! well, you did...P like your story! FUNNY!

oh

well...

sibling love xD it kind of reminds me of my own fic 8D

*also writes a natsumexmikan sibling love xD* but mine they are half siblings (they have the same mother) XD

if you are interested in read 8D here's the link

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well, good luck ;D sometimes it is difficult to write about sibling's love -

i know xD

ahahahahaha

x**