Interesting work. Thanks for writing and I enjoyed this.

You really do have a wonderful touch as a writer. You also have the polish of an experienced storyteller. Have you considered a professional writing career?
Excellent chapter.

ok, great story! but what pairing is this
Draco Malfoy?Lavedra Brown?

Brilliant!
You have a true gift as both a writer and a storyteller. That was perfect.

wow keep it up I can see were lav thinks hermione is pretty with her being preggers and hoe draco will tell her lav is the only one for him..sigh keep it up I want to read more

That was so sweet... I really liked it...
I don't usually read stories of Lavender, because honestly, I don't really like her, I mean, she's all right, but... yeah, well... Anyways, your story was good... Are there going to be more chapters? Or is this it? Hope there's more to the story...


LizzWeasley

nice one !