HURRY UP AND WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS!

Wow, I can't wait for the next chappies! And you previous stories kicked ass! Is Monica gonna make it back to Jack in PoC?

BlackRose

Its great I absolutly love it, it maynot be Pirates but I LOVE The Brothers Grimm, totally one of my favorite movies.I love how you mix the fairytale with your story its so awsome great job keep up the great work.

Too short, dammit.

Otherwise, yay! I love the Bremen Town Musicians! And I love Jake. And I love you for writing the best self-insertion fic EVAR. Usually they suck, but not this one!

Definitely favorited. Thumbs UP, y'all!

Hoorah, the brothers finally show! Not that it's obvious which one you prefer or anything. But I share your predilection, so yay. XD If you don't mind me having a girly moment, Jake is SO cute! (squee) OK, I'm done. Excellent capturing of their personalities (at least I think so. I haven't seen the movie for ages) Poor Jake's glasses. -_-;

You make the best anti-Mary-Sue EVAR. Is it weird to tell someone that they're an awesome OC?

Poor you. o_O Again, nice weaving of the fairy tales into your story. Ooh, cliffhanger...

Wow! Where do I start?

Love the "don't freak, don't- frick!" bit. Love the clothes and the shoes. Love the bird. Love the use of the fairy tale, and your reactions. Hell, love everything...

Moving forward!

Looking good so far. :3

I haven't read any of your other dryer stories, but I might look into them. Why? Because, for one thing, this one's actually very well-written. Much better than I expected.

I'll read on now. :D

Wow, I love you! o.O This story is amazing, and Jake and Monica are so cute. :D Haven't read your POTC ones yet, but I'll get around to it, I promise. xD Update soon!

you can't stop here

very great

Amazing, as per usual, though shorter than usual as well.

PLEASE update soon. I beg of you. Again.

Don't stop! Don't stop! Don't stop! I'm begging you to continue this. I absolutely love this fic. Don't you dare stop I'd have to hurt you or something.

YAY! I promise I never gave up hope that this story would be updated. Never! It's like in Princess Bride. It was only MOSTLY dead. lol. Great chapter!

This is a really good story; hope to see some more chapters.