 Jedi totallyNsane 2009-12-22 . chapter 10O, I love Jix. Great, awesome, wonderful story. Love it! Brilliant, funny, and I really do like how they all get along. Great job! |
 one of the lost 2009-05-03 . chapter 10Great fic! So where did you come up with Jix? He's a very good character. |
 brolly501 2009-03-11 . chapter 10good story |
 Mara Amon 2009-01-29 . chapter 10Very, very good!! |
 Veglma 2009-01-17 . chapter 10HAH.
Take that ya ugly bastard! That what ya get! (Although yes, I am wish Leia in wanting another body part getting cut off, but hey! I can live with the head getting cut. :D)
*smiles at the end*
(And oh lawl at the 'Uncle D! Want a cookie?' part. XD) |
 ilovenat1995 2008-10-27 . chapter 10I loved this story. You should do a sequel. |
 GoldenRat 2008-05-16 . chapter 10Great fic! All the characters seem very IC. |
 TheSummoningDark 2008-04-13 . chapter 10*joyful flail* I love, love, LOVE how you write the relationship between Jix and Vader! Really, the world would be a better place if it contained more Jix-and-Vader fic (Or even Vader/Jix, seriously, I'll take anything I can get here no matter how much the thought disturbs me). Or to put it another way: write more! Please! You know you want to!
Peace out
~TSD |
 Rinter 2008-02-27 . chapter 10I always like when Vader acts more like Anakin would.
It's out of character (or is it – they are the same person after all) but exciting and funny.
I can imagine he feels like young Anakin during the moments of action
– with Jix standing behind him on a swoopbike :D
Wonderful ending. Haha, Leia left Vader speechless for a moment!
This was very good fic. I'm eagerly waiting for your next story. |
 ILDV 2008-02-12 . chapter 10Wonderful end for a wonderful super great story.
Leia's knees went weak, but suddenly Luke was there. His arms went around her, and she collapsed against his chest, hardly about to believe it was finally over.
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“Not the body part I would have removed,” Leia muttered shakily in an attempt to be brave as Luke held her supportively.
She is right.
Please update soon with a new story.
You are very speedy. Many thanks for it. |
 ElusiveMaverick 2008-02-11 . chapter 10Companion piece sounds nice, but this story simply demands a sequel! This turn of events certainly changes things for everyone and I think another story by the talented Second-Last Herald-Mage is precisely what is necessary to do this, particular need justice. That said, I absolutely love it! I love the end so much. So very much. I wonder what will happen when Vader discovers the truth of Luke and Leia's bond and the ironic significance of his last words to her. I know you said that this is the last chapter, but update soon! |
 Guilia 2008-02-11 . chapter 10Interesting ending. I don't quite see Vader letting them go, but then I don't see him helping them quite like he did either. Still, I think you managed to make it work. You explained Vader's motive for wanting to catch Gledn, when a criminal of his type would normally be below Vader's notice. I still ended up feeling like Vader's character was a little off, but you were consistent with it and gave him enough depth that it worked.
I thought Luke's and Leia's characters were spot on. And how like Leia to do her own thing! The interaction between them was great as well.
Thanks for the great read! |
 phantom-jedi1 2008-02-11 . chapter 10Well, it ended a little sooner than I expected, but it was a good ending, really. I'm planning on going back and reading through this from the beginning again and sending you a pm with my overall thoughts.
As to this chapter...very good! I didn't really expect Vader to let them go that easily, but it was a pleasant surprise, nonetheless.
I can't wait to see this companion piece of yours and to find out what you'll be writing next.
Phantom Jedi |
 allison lightning 2008-02-11 . chapter 10I like ... a lot. Neat end... it was unique |
 Princess Geia 2008-02-11 . chapter 10Oh! It gives me chills... I'm so sad to see it go, but I do look forward to 'The Request'.
Great fic! Will there be more? I'd love to see the four meet again. Think about it?
:D
Well done, I really enjoyed this. Keep writing fabulously! |