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| melissaturkey 2008-05-26 ch 9,  | abuseokay i thought that it got a little crazy with the dreams and blood and stuff in the mmiddle but it all resolved okay. good fan fic! |
| Skavnema 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseThis series is really good ^^ I extreemly enjoy this. I just have one question- wasn't the Lady of the Lake pagan? |
| Marial79 2008-02-27 ch 9, | abuseI love all your storys! keep up your good work! |
| Robin-Marian-Fan 2008-02-03 ch 9, | abuseR u going to write more? i think this story is fab:L Althought i wud love for the chapter to be longer x |
| liz22463 2007-11-29 ch 9, | abusei loved the trio thing. but i think the ending could have been better |
| craziichick01 2007-11-17 ch 9, | abuseYou probably dont write storis anymore but i just wanna give you props your story is AWESOME |
| Ludwina 2007-07-15 ch 9, | abuseWow, I really enjoyed this whole trilogy. Congratulations for creating a fanfiction which is loyal to its canon, yet has its own original plot. The only thing I can pick at are a few grammatical mistakes, for example a handful of double positives, incorrect past tense (e.g. past tense of raise in that context is rose not raised) and in replaced with into ('landed into Will's arms' should be 'landed in Will's arms'). Anyway, I suggest you proofread better or use a beta. Aside from that, we just need some more heart-tingling moments between Will and Ellie and you're pretty close to perfection! Jess. |
| prongsies.lady 2007-07-03 ch 9, | abuseok well, i don't normally read anything but harry potter and sometimes starwars fanfiction. but i just finished rereading avalon high at 2 am. and i had to check out the fanfiction for it. your is awesome. you kept it at just the right tone and level for the story, and made an excellent sequel to the book because it shows that even after you win, there are still battles to be fought and people to oppose you. so write that new avalon high story, and write others! this review goes for the whole trilogy, just so you know is it true meg cabot wrote a second avalon high? awesome. laurie |
| ILoveIt09 2007-06-25 ch 9, | abuseLove it so much. Must right more |
| Snowgren 2007-06-25 ch 9, | abuseThat was a very interesting read! All that fantasy part felt like that picture of Elle in the new book. I so can't wait for it! Thanks for completing the story much sooner than expected! |