I have to say, I really like the idea of an insecure, nervous Jordan. It's sort of comforting, or maybe just sexy, I'm not sure. Whatever the case, good job for pulling it off and keeping her in character.

xoxox

wolf

Aw, that's so sweet! The only thing better was if it ended in lots and lots of Jorliot sex, but it seems like we're moving in that general direction, so I'll trust you.

xoxox

wolf

Ooh! Jordan should be wearing a red dress! I swear to god, she'd look fucking *amazing* in a red dress...

xoxox

wolf

Hah, poor Jordan! It's good to see some Jorliot outside of the JDCox fics (because those are nice, but it's not the same as the pairing having their own fics).

By the way I changed my username, so no longer will you see arynna reviewing your JDCox fics, it's prettypriestess now :D Speaking of which, your updates are slowing a bit :P

lol love it!

It's so IC and wonderfuly written and your realy getting me into this couple!

also love the little JD/Perry mentionings

Yay! Update. I really love how Jordan is worried about how to be a lesbian. She would think that there's a "right way" to go about it, of course. And I'm so squeeing over the fact that she doesn't quite know what to do, but she really wants to get it right. So frickin' *aw*. XD

Butch Jordan? Ew. She could do scary butch lesbian without chopping off her hair. Hope updates for your other stories are right around the corner.

Aw, Jordan can be sappy too! I knew it XD. And they TALKED! Sort of. I love how each really wanted to be with the other, but thought they weren't wanted. Life sucks that way sometimes :D Anywhat, great job once more!

The way you write these two is the only reason I'm interested in this girl/girl stuff. The only thing different about Jordan and Elliot is that they like each other and that is hard to do for slash stuff. Bravo.

Ya know, watching the show, I'd never really thought of this pairing, but I'm finding that I like it A LOT. XD I always loved the little Jordan/Elliot bits in your JDCox stories, and I'm extremely happy that you've started a story just about them! I can't wait for more.

Not much into the lesbian action, but I like Elliot and Jordan too much from your other fics to not read this. That said, it was pretty good and can't wait for it to turn into something more slashy.