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Reviews for: The Heirs Of Proteus
SnappleAddict
2007-06-27 . chapter 5
Hey, like your fic. There gonna be a sequal?
Rigil Kent
2007-06-25 . chapter 5
Excellent as always. I was hoping that Pike would read Montoya the riot act for acting like a moron, and I was glad to see that he did exactly that. It does make me wonder, though, whether she could conceivably be brought up on charges for dereliction of duty since it was her stupid decision that lead to the fatality...

Anyway, great job. Looking forward to the next one ... and especially interested in finding out about what changes that Pike had in mind...
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