I think you need to go into more detail with this. It's really good.

That was intense, somewhat confusing, and full of emotional resonance. I think that Daniel's self-awareness can be a curse sometimes. Jack is concerned about the results, but for Daniel, that's just one part of the equation.

Anyway, this story was fascinating and I feel like I need to re-read it about three more times. I'm unbearably curious about the decision Daniel made, but I understand that it's not necessary for the story. That doesn't make me any less curious though. A great read that is going to keep me thinking for the rest of the day.

Intense. Poor Daniel.

A very interesting take on Daniel, and remarkably well done. He's always been the humanist, the empathetic one. . . it's interesting to see him so coldly analytical. Yet still caring. Excellent work.