Oh, well, I must say, though I'm not much for InuTaisho based stories, or characters, this is a really nice read. I like it. You have a skill of not going overboard in detail, yet... still drawing a reader in. Kudos.

This is new: first person. A new style for you, but you've undertaken it well. Picked out Taisho's (sp?) character immediately. Great work. But be sure to keep your OC out of the Mary-Sue range ...

That was A-W-ESOME! I can't wait for the rest! Please hurry up!

Holy shit this is awesome. Really cool stuff! I can see everything happening! Favorites, man!

OMG *LOVE* how u write! This is AMAZING! More plz!