   pokemaster101 5/6/11 . chapter 1Aw, how sweet! - |
| RyukoVulpix 7/4/04 . chapter 1 Aww. Cute. :) Satoshi and Shigeru are really good friends... somewhere deep down. |
| Pokelover 4/17/04 . chapter 1 I really loverd this story. I really loved the ending. Great Job! |
| JessiChi 10/11/03 . chapter 1 Aww so cute. |
| Leena-and-Earlie 9/19/02 . chapter 1 I Loved your story!
A. Satoshi |
| Justin Adams 6/15/01 . chapter 1 Nice story, made sense. |
| Mandy Insane Saiyan 9/13/00 . chapter 1 *sniffs* So sweet! |
| Sabrina the psychic gymleader 6/24/00 . chapter 1 WOW! |
| Sharkdog 6/24/00 . chapter 1 What a cool story! Nice to see Gary and Ash as friends again, if this would happen in the real series, it would be very cool with Gary now at ash' side (well not literally, but you know what I mean)
I give it a 9 outta 10, because of the spelling errors in it _ |
| Pikabit 6/23/00 . chapter 1 Awww...that's so SWEEEEEET! Adorable! I don't know what to say except, WRITE MORE SOON! |
| Charles RocketBoy 6/23/00 . chapter 1 A few spelling mistakes, but overall good. But WHY does Gary think ash is better than him? ASH SUX! Gary's WAY better! |
| Dragoness 6/23/00 . chapter 1 ...Aw...Poor guys. All of them...Lucky Dratini, though...Okey, kewl...Ending was a bit sudden...Poor Shigeru for crying like that...in front of Satoshi of all people...Ah, well...At least they're not enemies anymore...*_*;; |
| Pikapal 6/23/00 . chapter 1 *sniff sniff* That was really good! And you made me think... maybe Gary/ Shigeru isn't really as bad as he seems. Great story! |
| Freakachu 6/22/00 . chapter 1 *sniffs* This one almost made me cry, Arti you are the best ) Your fanfics are awsome o_o
Freaka o_o |
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