This was GREAT! I loved it. I can so see that happening. Those to don't fight nearly enough.

GO HAKKAI! (Keep up the great work)

"Your accent's fake. And you fight like a girl."

Roflmao! I love how they stayed completely in-character the entire time!

genius. I was laughing SO hard when Hakkai threw out his childish little insult. And of course, i lost it again after only just regaining control at the "Necrophiliac" comment. Hakkai and Hazel conversing has always brought a smile to my face, but you made that smile into a full-blown laughing fit; awesome!

AWESOMESS!

this.is.HILARIOUS! i absolutally hate Hazel and i love how Hakkai always acts so mean to him. Hakkai rocks and when he called Hazel a necrophiliac i lost it. my sister looked at me like WTF? your great.

flatout funny

Funny! Luv your dialogue!

HA! Good story! It's so like them!!

This is so funny! I couldn't believe the clip I read of it at OOS -- This is perfect-putdown!!

This is classic! Love your dialogue!

Loved it! Spot-on characters.

Truly hilarious!! My pick for Otaku Online's Dec. fanfic poll! Hope you win!

Wow- I think I may die from laughter... X3

I think I'm speechless! (You've got to be good to do THAT to me) The ending I found to be too funny for words to describe. (I'm going to go off and ROFL to death now X3)

"Your accent's fake. And you fight like a girl."

I think I died a little inside. That line was so childish yet so perfect at the same time. Just the thing to get the fight really going.

Though 'necrophiliac' had to be my favorite insult. Such fun indeed. Yes, Hazel and Hakkai should never be left alone together. Ever.

A great read. I enjoyed that. :D

*Snicker* god, that was funny. And in Hakkai's unique brand of snippy, snide humour which leaves doubt whether he was intending to insult you as bad as he did. Marvolous!