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Reviews For: The Power of Fire and Water

heather
2008-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was very good for a starter! congradulations =]
i want to know what happens next...please!
Frost of MysticClan
2007-11-25
ch 14, anon.
abuseGreat story! I think that Adriane's grandmother really does know about magic, and your story proves it.
Queen of Forums
2007-11-25
ch 14,
abuseGreat! I love it!
Post-It Note Soap
2007-10-07
ch 14,
abuseReview for the whole story that I'm reading again.

Very descriptive and AWESOME! Mistmoon is nice and mossear is grumpy . . . Different thing . .oops.
Rainpath
2007-07-15
ch 10,
abuseReally great writing. Keep it up!
Post-It Note Soap
2007-07-13
ch 9,
abuseSam:This is a a great story. And I'm glad someone else is actually reading Avalon.

Isa and Mandy:(Are rereading the story for the fifth time.)
Rainpath
2007-07-04
ch 2,
abuseIt's very good so far, but it oculd use a little more description. Keep writing!
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