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| heather 2008-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was very good for a starter! congradulations =] i want to know what happens next...please! |
| Frost of MysticClan 2007-11-25 ch 14, anon. | abuseGreat story! I think that Adriane's grandmother really does know about magic, and your story proves it. |
| Queen of Forums 2007-11-25 ch 14, | abuseGreat! I love it! |
| Post-It Note Soap 2007-10-07 ch 14, | abuseReview for the whole story that I'm reading again. Very descriptive and AWESOME! Mistmoon is nice and mossear is grumpy . . . Different thing . .oops. |
| Rainpath 2007-07-15 ch 10, | abuseReally great writing. Keep it up! |
| Post-It Note Soap 2007-07-13 ch 9, | abuseSam:This is a a great story. And I'm glad someone else is actually reading Avalon. Isa and Mandy:(Are rereading the story for the fifth time.) |
| Rainpath 2007-07-04 ch 2, | abuseIt's very good so far, but it oculd use a little more description. Keep writing! |