Please update as soon as possible^_^...

above any other author in the Naruto fanfiction archive, you inspire me the most.

Oh god, I loved these. Especially Lee, Tenten, Naruto, and Shikamaru.

that was cool, though i dun really like the ino one
but the rest were awesome, so there you go n.n

It's beautiful...

Just as powerful, if not more so, than the first set. As the others were, these give wonderful insight to the characters with great wording and descriptions. Can't wait for more. Also, I hope you won't mind me adding this to my C2.

This is absolutely breathtaking. You've really hit something with these guys, really gotten deep into them. The flow and imagery in these are great.

wow that was totally awesome!

the dreams bit was a little hard to understand in places, but i guess that made it more realistic, because dreams aren't like life and reality, dreams are things you wake up from and seconds later you don't understand how it happened or why, and a minute after that you don't remember it at all.

So that was awesome

The fears bit was even better! because they're things that make SENSE to fear for these people, but the way you portrayed it made me feel a little like I was them and that I personally feared those things too O_o little scary

Yay! I can't wait to read the other chapters!

Hey, hun. Read these two chapters now.

First off -- VERY nice. One of your traditional personality insights that you love to do and do so very well (one day, I'll be able to do that. Some day.)

However, one suggestion off the top of my head. How about a parallel construction at the end? You have it going in most places. You end them all in "Suchandsuch dreams of..." or "Suchandso fears..."

I dunno. I always liked parallelism so I'm biased.

I'll have more critiques later, when I read it over again with a bigger print.

-Ely

I think Ten Ten's, Sakura's, and Shikamaru's, are my favorite. Very nice job.

this is amazing

the way you analyze and get into a shinobi is just crazy
i especially am interested in rock lee's fears, nothing. is this actually possibe, if he was trying to help others, wouldn't he fear people hating him and not liking him or is he just too optimistic. Keep up the good work

looking forward to the next update

Loved it.

Very interesting character introspection, I especially like the Tenten one.

This is quite possibly the first time in ages since I've sat down to read something you've written, much less review it. It was refreshing. It made me see Naruto the way you do; the serious way. You are, of course, missing some characters. I'd like to see their dreams. Gaara should be interesting, since, well, he rarely ever sleeps (well, we could assume he does now because of that entire ordeal pertaining to Akatsuki) due to Shukaku. Unless, you were aiming for the Konoha rookies. I do believe that if it is like that, that your list is complete.

Sincerely, it was great. I still see traces of that pesky drifting our teachers and peers complain about, though (I having the same problem as well but in larger amounts). Unless this is old and you gave me the link just for the Hell of it, then, yeah, we both need to work on our focus.

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