This was an insightful look at Gwendolyne and Oswald's relationship -which I believe takes place between the time when Gwendolye presented Titrel to her father and the time she went searching for Oswald in the Fire Kingdom.

Nice flow and choices of dilogues, I like how you didn't go overboard in decribing Gwendolyne's yearning for him and what Myris said really went well with her comment in the game on how Oswald seemed to be the only thing that occupies Gwendolyne's head lately.

This one too. You should continue this. This is my favorite couple and I like your writing style so... Ahem... Should I get on my knees and start begging for a continuation?

Awesome story! I really love this pairing and this is a beautiful story. Thank you for writting it!

My this is certainly a lovely piece, I am nearing the end of the game myself. Gwendolyn and Oswald relationship is sweet, and the way you describe it in this piece of writing is quite nice, and to point. Gwendolyn's conflicting emotions and how wise Myris truly is.