 Little Kunai 2009-01-29 . chapter 1very interesting |
 celestialmuffins 2008-12-25 . chapter 1No flames for you! They burn Zetsu! D: This was amazing and enrapturing of my curiosity to the fullest! I really like it, Please write more like this~ :D |
 Santeira 2008-12-12 . chapter 1Read it, I think you have style and I love your descriptions of everything, very vivid.
I kinda feel like this is what horror short stories are usually made of--amazingly detailed but oddly ironic.
And Zetsu is quiet and unmoving, I guess because Hinata's movements and curiosity entertain him so.
I'd love it if there's a sequel to this, or if you make it chaptered story.
Thanks for writing this. Please write more. :) |
 Buddug 2008-08-17 . chapter 1I've never read a Zetsu/Hina but this was very intersting... I loved they way you described everything... from the thoughts to the imagery. I love the tension you created by paralleling the memory and Hinata. The smile at the end threw me off for a moment... but does the smile mean that he "consumed what [he] yearned for"? Er ...anyway this is diffinetly an instant fav. 8D |
 13yo 2008-06-11 . chapter 1i wish there where more stories like this one. |
 Sweet.Longing 2008-06-09 . chapter 1You're an amazing writer. That's all I need to say. This was a short story, but I loved every bit of it. You have so much talent that I envy. Wonderful job on this. |
 Daniel 2008-04-18 . chapter 1 Im very impressed by this short story, this is perhaps one of the few things ive EVER read with such a desire to keep going! It was REALY good! Just so you know i NEVER comment on these sites because i find it pointless but this was to good to pass up!! |
 Secret Sheik 2008-02-14 . chapter 1ZetsuHina? Wow. Now that is obscure. :D |
 supersquidgirl 2008-02-01 . chapter 1O.O ...Wow. That was really, really good. That was awesome. Wow. Love to read more of your stuff. |
 lon 2008-01-02 . chapter 1 its good just as it is, i think. :)
you're a very good author! i'm enjoying reading your stories! :D
keep it up!! *thumbs up kakashi style* |
 Punkey-Monkey 2007-12-08 . chapter 1Wa!...UPDATE! I WANNA READ MORE!! |
 imanokie01 2007-12-01 . chapter 1I thought that was good. Curiosity killed the cat. |
 profist of doom 2007-11-02 . chapter 1? lolololollolololol didnt make much sense but hey since when did zetsuhina make sense?good job you should write humor! |
 demon scream 2007-10-14 . chapter 1I love it. 'So the bug grew bolder' That phrase sends chills down my spine and leaving me to wonder... Awesome going to my favs. |
 fsalt 2007-08-16 . chapter 1I liked this story it was differant but interesting too. |