Reviews for Playing It Well

Reviews For: Playing It Well

SnowLion no Miko 2008-03-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh, I misread, my bad. It does seem more of an RandalElias now that I read it closer, but it doesn't make me like it any less. I would love to see Dante's reaction to it all though in maybe a second chap, perhaps? ^_^
SnowLion no Miko 2008-03-19 ch 1,	abuseThis was a great read. I enjoyed every bit of it. It was really well written and I hope you write more DanteRandal in the future. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
musicisavictim 2007-08-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was great! Will there be a sequal? It would be funny if Elias turned out a wild beast in the sack.
Ladywilde 2007-07-16 ch 1,	abuse"F- you, Granny Smith." - ROFL - That was so Randall and so perfect. What a great story and you write everyone so well. This was awesome. I am huge fan to your "Hawk and the Dove," story and I got to tell you I am sad to see that it won't be updated but I really look forward to reading more of your stuff. This was just hilarious. Loved it.
miss-cold 2007-07-14 ch 1,	abuseWah! this was awesomome! It would be such a trick for Randall to pull, but the way Elias retaliate was great ^_^0 and that awkward moment at the end keeps you guessing. I hope there's a second chapter, it'd be great to see Dante's reaction when the shock wears off. Heh great fic!
Elendraug 2007-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHEE. I've been waiting for an Elias/Randal fic since I first saw the movie. X3 Elias pwning him was definitely the best part. I also love how they went to McDonald's, and not Mooby's. They must be banned from the restaurant. 8D One thing I did notice was that your grammar's a teeny bit off when it comes to dialogue and its punctuation. Something like this: ' "Well of course it is." The older man said. ' should really be ' "Well of course it is," the older man said. ' Just a quick tip; hope it helps. :3
FinniganToldMeTo 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was good. And about damn time someone addressed this poss. area of fiction. I love seeing it. ^_^ So, you know... this one has potential to be more than just a one-shot... -hint-
Dixie Chicken 2007-07-01 ch 1,	abuseYes! Finally, someone wrote a Randal/Elias fic! And an awsome one at that! XD Keep up the good work! You've got skill.
Ms. Elbow 2007-06-28 ch 1,	abuseOh shit, that was awesome! That was seriously amazing. I'm really bad at reviewing and I tend not to unless something really REALLY impresses me. That did. Write more for Clerks, dude, please? There's such a lack of good fics for this fandom.

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