So sexxxxyyyyyyy i love it!

Love it! Absolutely love it! I want more;) lol

you're a genius at this.

PERFECT

I love it! I will kill for more!

Don't feel shameful. You did good.

OroKabu is so pretty! And I love this! Very... Very... Nicce. [drools everywhere] Kudos!

I loved it! good job!

Aw, don't feel that way! This is really well done, and not TOO graphic, making it awesome! Good job! This pairing is well done here.

haha! there's no need to feel dirty and shameful. if you read my stories, then that's another story... heh heh, I'm sorta like the Nidaime Kakashi...or Nidaime Jiraiya...

I thought it was well written. This one's going on my favourites list. And I don't think you made it really graphic.

I liked it a lot!

Tenshi _

I loved this, I'm adding this and you to my favs list!

aww, don't feel dirty and shameful. It was very well written, and you didn't go overboard with the graphicness (is that a real word?)

So, good job, 100 out-of 10

AWW

i loved it!

awesome job