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| caylender 2007-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseWow, that was amazing! I love the way you worded it. It really flowed well. |
| PrettyArbitrary 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuse"Raph is always words." Wow! I'd never thought of it that way before, but that's pretty cool. I also like the thought that he knows how much Raph wants to protect his family, and holds him back from it so he doesn't have to make the sacrifices that would entail. And the last line is tear-your-heart-out painful. Poor Leo! So dedicated, so selfless. He hollows himself out for the sake of the others and feels bad that he doesn't have more to give. |
| kytyngurl2 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseWow yet again! Are you tired of me saying that yet? You must be. I think this drabble highlights your ability to create these stunning but disorienting mental images with lovely worldplay and metaphors and all around awesomeness than any of your other fics. This fic is just a joy to read, I really really admire the technical skill that went into it. As for it's content, well, that's also pretty darn amazing! I guess I see this as a sick/feverish Leo having fever dreams and sucumbing to his fears as his family treats him. I really do love your Leo, and it's writers like you that have changed him from a character I hated to someone I like and feel sorry for. I understand him now, and I understand him so much in this fic it hurts. Just amazing! |
| Pi90katana 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseDang that was good! So Leo was sick? Very interesting. Another fic to add to my favorites! |
| vashsunglasses 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseIt captures the sadness of insanity beautifully. |
| Serendipity1 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI love the near stream-of-consciousness flow this story has, expressing the hazy state of Leo's mind very well. As someone who's had a concussion and little else to warp her mental state, it comes off as perfectly dizzy, vague, and almost symbolic in the way you concentrate on sensations and snatches of memory. It's almost like Leonardo's mind is unraveling here, which is a perspective I personally have always wanted to try. Great job! |
| The Ghost of FF. Net 2007-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI was totally sucked in. I love your way with words, and tortured Leo anytime is good. :D Thanks for the review, BTW! ;) |
| Reinbeauchaser 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseDementia, Alzheimers, or insanity. Either one of three or all three, but - wow - what a jumble of thoughts and emotions. A very tangled yet thought-provoking missive. Be blessed, Rene' |