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Link-luvr
2007-09-10
ch 1,
abuseOMG that was so sweet! I love the way you've written his title of 'Dad' as it really should be.
Awesomely (is that a real word?) written. Please do more
Angel Born of Darkness
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abuse*wipes tear* aw so sweet
Mee Yah
2007-07-23
ch 1,
abuseooh that's so sweet!!
HiddenWavePrincess
2007-07-21
ch 1,
abuseMithos actully had his wings before he transfroemd into the spandex wearing older form... The only difference is that as Yggdrasil, his wings are pink but as Mithos, his wings are actully rainbow colored...
arisu tsuranu
2007-06-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse... ... ... That was amazing~! I was squealing my head off! :D You rock! Even though you have no experience, I still say you made a cute Father/son/kratos/lloyd one-shot father's day fic EVER. :D I am still amazed...goodness! XD
Legend of Shadow
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseBeen a long time since I teared up at all reading a one-shot... you obviously know how to map out emotions that you can't relate to entirely, since this is actually very believable. And good. Very good.
Mez10000
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseSweet. Although, I'm really in the same situation as you when it comes to fathers, so I can't really say if it was...(word lost to the word)

Anyway, hope to read you soon!
Holly EverGreen
2007-06-26
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw that was so cute!
Onihime 942
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseGreat, thanks a lot! Now I've got tears in my hot chocolate! It tastes all salty now. THANKS A LOT! (But hey, I guess it's my fault for drinking hot cocoa in the summer).

...Now that I'm done drying my tears, I just wanted to say that the bit about the statues is possibly the sweetest thing Lloyd could ever do for Kratos! Please keep on writing things like this! You're so good at it! (Especially since a lazy gal like me hardly ever gets off her arse to review anymore).
Dawnstarshine
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseAh... that was... beautiful... I expect no less from you. Simply breathtaking. I absolutely adored it. This was was a great way to follow up after hours of anime...

Well, hope you update one of your other stories soon! ^o~ Keep on doing a spectacular job!
Ryna-chan
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuse...That was the cutest thing I have ever seen! X3

I could just gush on and on on how cute and fuzzy everything was, but I won't, cause that would be the whole oneshot. :D

I love the Title theme that you used throughout; very imaginative with the descriptions for the made-up titles. ^o^ ...And good thing you didn't put the discription for "Dad", huh? "A name I will never be called, and did not seek; until now."
freakyanimegal456
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThat was so...perfect. I mean, in every way, just sweet and happy. Heh heh...


...You don't live with your Dad?

...Treause your mom even more. You can miss what you don't have, but you'll despair over what you do when it's gone.

Woah. Did I get that from a fortune cookie?! O.o
VeiledDarkness
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseI think you did more than okay with this; It was excellent! The last part with Lloyd's letter was great! I'll be sure to add this to my favorites.

But, about Mithos having wings when he was in his child form, he did in the game. You only ever see them once, during the final battle, but he has rainbow colored wings. Just thought I'd let you know.
Fehize
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseIts so cute! -squeals- And sad, but to my pov, not cheesy at all. -nods- As for Mithos, he has wings and looks even more like a [strike]girl[/strike]. :D
Wasabi-sama
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseAww, you almost made me cry! It was really cute and touching and I liked how you had Kratos reflect on all his titles. Aww man, now I get teary eyed whenever I think about the statues!
This story was well written and I think you should write more stories of this type! Great job!
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