Yay, Snicker. Best thing about csi. Love this. It is bittersweet and regretful.

But like I said, yay for the snickers.

Huh? This is very, very confusing. You start off vague, but quickly narrow it down to Grissom or Nick. Then you basically tell us it's Grissom getting married with all the hints relating to the last season and canon. And then you say Mr and Mrs Nick Stoke. What? Grissom and Sara are dating! That's canon! At the very least you should label this story AU because it is already purposely confusing (in a good way) before you toss in the fact you ignored that Grissom and Sara are together in the show.

Your grammar and spelling are good. Your plot idea is good, but your plot is too confusing.

this one had me totally confused . It seemed like your were talking about nicks point of view ...then u went to grissims .

It was good, but I will break Nick into two if he did that. Stole Sara from Grissom..Grr. Well written. News though Jorja signed for 5 eppy's so far, hopefully more afterwards.