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My Deteriorating Sanity.
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseBloody hell, SOMEONE'S forward!! The whole 'fingers' thing was a little creepy, but nice at the same time. It makes me wonder whether Ryou would be the same if he wasn't speech impaired? And WHY was he speech impaired, for that matter? This is a rhetorical quetion, I'd just love to know, since it wasn't an actual condition... Aw, it made me a little sad when Bakura glared at Ryou, but I get that he must have felt guilty afterwards. Ryou was so affectionate, in a really warm, lovely way. ^_^ Cute, great work!
FlyingShadow666
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abusewonderful! i really liked it! is lovely little ryou-chan ever going to talk? are you going to continue this? i hope you do! i love how bakura (and everyone else) is SO nice to ryou-chan! :D its great! ryou-chan is so KAWAII!

~Thumper~
journey maker
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is absolutely beautiful. Does Ryou ever talk? I love the fact that Bakura is so gentle with him. As he started to make Ryou feel good and when Ryou moaned, well I started to cry because it was Bakura's love for him that made such an impact on Ryou. Please, are you going to continue this story?
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