That was so sad! I loved it though, the writing was really good. Keep writing!

It was really sad and sweet
I really liked it
I listened to the song with the part where she was singing it

so sad...but so GOOD
keep it up

its so good and sad!

that was so sad but it was so happy at the end that she had a baby but i wonder if iggy may feel responsibke fir his death because he made the bomb i hope he doesn't well i still like the story

Man. Just a one-shot? You have got to be kidding me. Talon can spin off a whole new story girl! Try it! =D

I loved it! it wasnt too ad and it wasnt too okay, yeah whatever. I liked it. :)

*sob* Now I'm really sad...

But I still have some constructive critisism :)
1. Song wasn't that necessary. Sorry, but maybe if you had just put in one or two verses it might have been more effective. I know that it's hard to leave out a song if it was your inspiration for the story, though, so I forgive you.
2. I wouldn't have put in all of their ages, it's not really needed if you just tell us Max's age.
3. How did they end up engaged?

But that's all just me complaining. This was really well done! Good job.

i liked it. sad, short, and sweet. :)