cool!

I thought is was prity good. There were some good lines and the general plot was well thought out, but there were bits that could have been worded better. Over all it was well writen. You maneged to make it pastionate not pervers. I truely enjoyed this story and I hope you will continue to write.

Oh, wonderful! This was really lovely, I hope your friend enjoyed it!

Well done

that has to have been one of the best lemons i have ever read. and by best, i dont mean arousing, but pure. i loved how it didnt focus completely on the sex, but on the relationship. it was...refreshing i suppose. reminds me why i even bother reading oneshot fanfiction.

Absolute pure sweetness and love and hawtness. You've got Rukia and Renji perfectly, and the poignancy and utter devotion between them is always tangible in your stuff.

I'm faving this story too. I pride myself on having the best collections, and this is a must have.

OMG! totally cute chappie! You should definitely make another one! More RenRuki for the world!

I couldn't even get past Renji's second line, why does he sound so much like a redneck?!?!?! God this is so stupid, i was hoping this'd be at least an OK lemon but i can't get 3 sentences in without wanting to rip my eyes out!

Nice story. Well-written.

I love this story

This was a great story!

::fans herself:: Who! HOT!
Silly Renji... Rukia is all for you!
Yes, I see chemestry between these two, and professional/friendship loyalty between Rukia and Ichigo.
As for Orihime, I actually get a kick out of her and Ishida. He has such a crush on her, and her obsession with Ichigo is just a tad to juvenile-ish to me.

Hey there, I don't think I got to read this one on LJ but I read it here. Luv it and it was a tasty story to read. It was very hot bit sincere and I like Renji trying out his puppy names for her. That was cute. As usual, I luv your RxR pieces. Kudos. :P

I loved the imagery in this one! ;0

Yay, another great one!