Dude, you have got a small treasure here and you do not even know it, do you ? Though I have watched the movie like months ago on the television, I have just started reading on the " Thief Lord " Fanfiction section during this week. The premisse of this story is incredibly awesome, and highly original, in my opinion. I mean, how many stories with Scipio not being the nice guy he is on Canon - or at least that is what is looking like to me - like yours?

Besides, you have a pretty good feel on the characters and their interactions.

Look, I know you have already warned on your profile that this fic is, probably, on a permanent hiatus - yeah, I went to your profile to check; I'm a stalker, sue me; LOL! - but I am really, really enjoying this story.

And wondering what you might have thought for the characters, what did exatly Mosca meant by "hell" and what is going to happen to the brothers is killing me. Are you sure you don't wann go back to updating? I'll be sure to review !

This sounds like a good story. So update please

Could you update, please? :P
Love it so far

O.o awesome!! update soon!
~Miki bidan

Ooh, I wonder why it's Hell. Continue with the story...

Interesting idea. Hope you continue it.

Sounds interesting. Please update soon, alright? See you later.

Please update soon I really like this story so please update :)