This is a great fanfiction. Love the combination of "Blood and Chocolate" and "Twilight" :) GOOD JOB!

i hope ull continue this story i like it much (o that made no sense) looking forward to the next chap lol

i cant wait till the next chap this story is too good to give up on and i want to see what hapens with edward and her

Why have you stopped writing?!

hey i like this chapter...and Blood and Chocolate
keep righting!

I love this story! It is the best. I love how well the stories are combined into one. I don't like the light Edward is being portrayed in though. He is a good guy in Twlight. But here he seems almost brutal with his honesty. :( Which I guess is kind of the point but still its sad.

Omg i have not been on forever and day, so i went looking for new stores YESTERDAY and i've read all this XD I LOVE MORE THAN LIFE, blood and Chocolate, and the Twilight books too. I think its why cool what you did here, i real want to read the next chapter now! *jumps up and down with joy*

omg wat happen? y is that a foolish thing to do? and where r the rest of your chapters? this is so good you should finish it (without an open ending) and two of my favorite books combined that is genius!

lapse in my memory...who is shady?

i am falling in love with jacob...slowly...especially since he geniunely cares about vivian, and he just wants her safe, as well as he is angry at himself for not being able to tell her things..

if you can tell me one thing, that i swear i won't share, is jacob a good guy!? also, did edward really mean all of that, or was it an act...please let me know, i didn't read any of the twilights, so i don't know if that's how edward really is...

please update soon!

Wow, you are adding a lot of twists. Aren't you? I livet the part where Bridget steals Vivian from Jacob.

O MAN! Please let Bridgette be Shady's chosen! It'll be lovely...

I've been waiting for the next chapter to be posted and now that it's over I'm sad... Update soon!

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I loved this chapter!! thanks so much for writing this story and i cant wait to read a novel of yours! itll be awesome, i just know it.

Claire de Lune means Moonlight? hmm... thats a wonderful piece... goodness, it must have sounded good, Edward was playing it... EDWARD period must have made it good! XD