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Reviews For: Labyrinth of the Heart

Bella Phantom
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseOk people, Ok... Just to put things in the clear, but I've corrected my mistakes in the first chapter... I have a few notes to add to the end of this chapter to clarify things...
notwritten
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseA very very interesting chapter.
yodeladyhoo
2007-06-26
ch 1,
abuseHeh ? Okay, so, how does Violet fit into the Williams' family ? Is she a cousin on Robert's side ? Does Sarah also have a cousin named Toby as well ? Who is Emily and why is it important to the story now ? Who is Ebony and his relationship with Jareth ? The shadow monster took Sarah and Marcus away already ? What happened there ?

Questions, questions, questions. I think you need to do some explaining before you can continue onto the next chapter.

Until again.
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