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Phyllis (fill~us)
2008-09-21 . chapter 13
That story was really sweet and I liked it a lot.
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 13
I know! I know! Im going to read them! And what is with all u great writers thinking you suck? U r wrong! Get the thought out of ur head! Is it out yet? Now? Good! :P Now, please update "Tali's" or "Hybrids" so I have even more to add to my overbearing reading list! :P It would make my day! Now, for real, see u later!
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 12
Loved it! Great ending! So sweet! And now they can stay together! Fantastic story! I cant wait to read the sequal, but that will have to wait for another time! See you later!

Oh ya, love that song, and love the tortuous love song idea! Now if we only could put songs in peoples heads in real life! :P
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 11
BOM! *laughs crazily* ... sorry

*rolls eyes* Nice try with the ending chapter early thing! What do u think ur trying to pull? :P 3 horrible cliffies in a row? If I didnt know better, Id think u did them on purpose (like someone else we know :P)

Yay! Shes free! And they can finally be together! WAHOO! Loved it! And now Ari 2 is a genie! Does he come up later?? But great job! Loved it! *sniff* and now to read the last chapter...
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 10
Um...u already did make it. :P

Yay! Rinas back! And the schools about to blow up! But that might not be a good thing now, what with them 2 being unconscious. :P I cant believe that happened! But I love how Rina even took the time to make dressing, um, mansions? :P and the shoes! Can I have some of those?? :P Need to read more!
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 9
Im going to have to say I would think she would go. And seeing as this not only has a sequel, but a trequel too, I think Im right :P

Great chappie! I love how Rina made her own lyrics! And poor Iggy! Hes devastated! I feel so bad for him! I like the genie headquarters! Need to see what she decided!!
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 8
Yay hugs! *looks dreamy* chocolate...

And that was a tiny bit depressing. :P Good job with the song fics! They really showed how Iggy was doing! Actually, good job with all of the feelings! It really shows how much Rina meant to them in her short stay, and how much of a hellhole school is! So, moving to the next chapter, and hopefully some happier times. If not, its still a great story! :P
cahawk
2008-01-14 . chapter 7
Hey again!

Wow...I am temporarily in shock over that version of the future...

No! She shouldnt have to go! But, I see her point. Humanity sometimes has to come before happiness...sometimes :P...Awesome chapter! Before the morbid parts, great humor! I loved the Fang in "total shock" with the eyes widening SO much! :P And even if it was scary, awesome description of what could be! Definitely something to persuade the Flock to start working on saving the world! Poor Rina! But great job with the farewell. Very touching! Moving on...
cahawk
2008-01-13 . chapter 6
Meh, title could have been worse...you could have just put THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! :P

And as to something you said last chapter that I forgot about...ouch! That hurt! You calling us all (boys) simple! :( :P

Great chapter! I loved your description of the whole romantic scene, with the moon over the water and everything! Sounded awesome! And now they are together! YAY!

Sry, but looks like Im gonna have to find out about the conflict later! Ill read the rest soon!
cahawk
2008-01-13 . chapter 5
Do I get a cookie too? :P

The part at the beginning (before we even got TO the chapter) was great. And I loved the rest, with the younger kids giving them the talk. Cant wait to read the next chapter, and for them to be together!!

MWAHAHAHA! Rina, all your secrets shall be revealed, and there is nothing you can do about it!
cahawk
2008-01-12 . chapter 4
I loved it! And the fluff was good! I love the love song idea! Now lets just get the other two together...and then the other two :P Cant wait to see what you put for the next chapter so, moving right along...
cahawk
2008-01-12 . chapter 3
It wasfunny! Just a little forced! And I cant really guess seeing as i already know :(

Great chapter! Aw poor Max and Fang! *smirks* So touchy when it comes to that subject! Now, to find out more about this evil plan! MWAHAHA!
cahawk
2008-01-12 . chapter 2
Rina sounds awesome! And she gets to stay! Cant wait to see what happens between Iggy and her!
cahawk
2008-01-12 . chapter 1
Hi Bre! I have been threatened by Katie, on pain of death, to read ur stories (which Ive been meaning to do, but keep forgetting :P) So, here I go!

Good chapter! I like it! I love the fact that Iggy and Gazzy turned the iPod into a bomb, but if that happened to mine, I think Id cry...they really do make world peace! :P And now to find out all about Rina!!
Twilight Temptress
2008-01-10 . chapter 2
Once again...nice.
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