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| MadFlo 2007-08-16 ch 2, | abuseReally good story. I like your writing, but you should describe the surroundings and perceptions of the charackters more detailed. |
| Wolvmbm 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseOkay just how did the Sentry and Superman fight since they both the same source of energy ? :( Just how did Doom control him ?:( Truly I can't what for more of this tale. :D |
| Wolvmbm 2007-07-10 ch 2, | abuseWow,please do continue your story. :D I want to see what does Blastaar does to Project 42. :D |