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Samantha Seldowitz
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
Hey, great story. I've read Slipups like 3 times and I never actually knew you started a sequel. I know it hasn't been updated in a while but I'd love it if you did. :)
Donteatacowman
2009-07-26 . chapter 7
Nice job, on both stories. :D I'm guessing this undead dude is the druggie/whatever he failed to help earlier in his teaching career? Thanks for writing!
Trinity Fenton-Phantom
2009-07-20 . chapter 7
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Ya should have a Dan illusion help them. He could even backstab them later. After all being around Dan, even a fake one would make Danny uncomfortable.
Animekitty47
2009-05-07 . chapter 7
Um, its almost been a year since this story was last updated. What happened? It was good! And, as is your habit, its at an annoying cliffie too! T-T
Animekitty47
2009-05-07 . chapter 5
A really good chappie! 'Disney is going to kill us all." Hilarious! XD
Kagome51
2008-11-12 . chapter 7
aw this hasn't been updated in a while! Please update soon! EVIL CLIFFIE! lol I like it
artyluvr
2008-09-02 . chapter 7
UPDATE!
goldacharmed
2008-06-16 . chapter 7
haha that was a really funny two chapters. i love the little lancers running around. oh man you cracked me up like hell. and then you and your evil cliffies of death, come on whats it going to take for you to update this thing, oh say right now. come on you know you want to, anywhoo great chapter and story so far. later dude
Jillie chan
2008-06-14 . chapter 7
Oh, who's dead? Mystery kid from last fic, Danny, or Mr. Lancer himself? See you soon.
watashiwapikushidesu
2008-06-10 . chapter 5
Ok so I tried sending this while I was at school today but it wouldn't let me. So I read chapter 5 finaly! All I can say is you must have had Batman/ Superman/ The Justice League on your mind. Have you been watching it recently. Bad squirrell bad. Well actually I probably shouldn't say bad if it gave you inspiration. Well another amazing chapter. I will try and read chapter 6 maybe on Thursday after Graduation.
DP-shrine-in-closet-girl
2008-06-09 . chapter 7
Lol! I love this story! Will Danny have to face his worst fear now? His evil self? Hurting people he loves? This is just so exciting! Oh, and I love your writing. I needed a good Lancer fic, and it was luck that I found this one. I’m a huge a lancer fan too!
Moony's Metamorphmagus
2008-06-05 . chapter 7
It's that boy, isn't it! The brown-haired boy that Lancer kept having flashbacks to when he didn't know Danny's secret and thought there might be something wrong psychologically with Danny. Wow, that was a long thought. As for the superheroes, I can't draw much, but I too would love to see them. I imagine they'd be rather cute. In a really twisted sort of way. Anyway, see you next. And boy was that a quick update! Will that work again? Wish it did for mine. (Eyes flicker toward dusty stories)

~MM
CatalystOfTheSoul
2008-06-05 . chapter 7
*squeals* its Chris isn't it? I've been following all your stories since yesterday, and i stayed up till 1 am, until i fell asleep on the computer...anyway, it's Lancers biggest fear (fear ghost! of course!)and next is Danny with Dan, I KNOW IT! *laughs* I just saw this coming! muahahaha, but i do love it so far, so update so I can confirm my musings! (yes, your not the only one with muses!)
*laughs* update, update, UPDATE! Please...
hollagirl
2008-06-05 . chapter 7
This story is awesome. Keep up the good work.
Thunderstorm101
2008-06-04 . chapter 7
That "world" of Lancers, all the super and villain ones, that was interesting. Sort of like an eternal childhood of good and evil, black and white, where there are never really any hard feelings or deaths.

That's a nice thought, that maybe everyone has something like that inside of them.
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