Reviews for The Office Special: Jim's Date

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rehilaration 2007-10-21 ch 5,	abuseI just wanted to tell you, this fic was PERFECT! You had all of the characters' natures down unbelievably well! Be proud of yourself! This is an Office masterpiece!
Scripted Starlet 2007-07-15 ch 4,	abuse“Permission to engage the enemy?” :)
Scripted Starlet 2007-07-15 ch 3,	abuse"Are you going to put out tonight?” HAH! Genius. You've got Kelly down to a T.
Scripted Starlet 2007-07-15 ch 2,	abuseWow. That Michael/Cupid bit was so Steve it was killing me. This fic is hilarious! And Jim saying 'Angela'? Cherry on the top. You should've gotten him to add that they had similar interests. Cats... God... hatred of all things anime... I'm sure that would've threatened Dwight. Nevertheless False! Angela doesn't even like lilies cracked me up and then some.
Scripted Starlet 2007-07-15 ch 1,	abuseThis is so cute. Can we get you to write the premiere?
PuffyCheese 2007-07-10 ch 5,	abuseGreat work on this fic. I think you did especially well on the characters comments (especially Michael and Jim); I could really see some of the asides to the camera as things the characters would say. Keep up the great work!
Nice-one 2007-07-08 ch 5,	abuseOkay, so I don't have much useful to say, but I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely adored this! And I think you deserve many more reviews than you've been getting so far. I think this story comes so close to being as funny and hilarious and great as the actual show and I feel that's a true accomplishment. I mean, you wrote every single person in character and it all just made sense. Once again: an outstanding job! Definitely favoriting this! Thanks for writing this! I thoroughly enjoyed it and I think it's pretty close to perfection!
kgreene 2007-07-05 ch 1,	abuseHm.. I just joined so I can't leave a private message yet. Sorry! And I don't know how those links I sent you got edited.(accidentally I hope : ) Let's try this again. Here they are: http://mtt. http://mtt. And, yes, I welcome all criticism. Thanks again and once more.. I loved the story. Very funny. The characters were "spot on", especially Michael, who can be written very badly. I look forward to more!
kgreene 2007-07-05 ch 5,	abuseTHAT... was really, really funny! I've actually written two scripts for the Office(and am working on a third) and I really enjoyed this. I hope you don't think this is too forward but I am sending links for the two scripts. (and you should post on More Than That... it's a good fic site.) Anyway, I love the story. I never thought of incorporating the rest of the cast into the Jam first date. Keep writing! http://mtt. http://mtt.
Literary Double 2007-07-04 ch 1,	abuseYou're story is so cute and fluffy. I am a huge jam fan. But seriously, do you watch A LOT of office episodes? Because I swear this sounds so much like their actual characters, especially when they're talking to the camera. Also, I fell off of my chair when I was reading the part where Dwight yells "Angela, I'm coming!" You are SUCH a good writer. And, I could really picture it in my mind when I was reading it. My friend and I were reading it together, and we were like, Oh my god, this could be an actual episode. Well, anyway, just wanted to tell you that you should seriously write more The Office episodes... Good job!
Bookybookbook 2007-07-03 ch 5,	abuseHere's an idea since you seem: to have Michael and Dwight characters down to a fine line - drunk Michael. I've had the idea for a while but I don't think I'd be able to do it. Well you're definitely underestimating yourself (as we all seem to do) because trust me this was pretty darn funny! Michael and Dwight were awesome in this fic and theres definitely no harm in more! I've never heard of a drunk Michael I seriously think it'd be awesome! You are a GREAT writer.
Cursive Obsession 2007-07-02 ch 5,	abuseGood story =). I thought it was a very well written story, and it did certainly bring a smile to my face, at least. I don't know if I would do a sequel to this story -- it'd almost have to be a completely different story anyways. I have some random ideas -- something on some form of transportation -- but NOT a car. Like a bus, train, or plane. An interaction of some sort. Or there could be like a dwight/angela and jim/pam DATE OFF or something. And maybe I should write something soon, eh? lol. Good luck!
rw4life 2007-07-02 ch 5,	abusewow...this was a really good story. it was a lot like the actual show, and you got dwight's character down perfectly!
Lady of The Sea-Green Wolf ... 2007-07-02 ch 4,	abuseAwesome Job! You got the characters voices perfectly. And Jim & Pam together at last. Icing on the cake...or cupcake. :D Thanks for the great story! -Lady Wolf Eyes
Twilight Rose2 2007-07-02 ch 4,	abuseThat was amazing! it was just like the show and it as so much fun to read! I can't wait for another one!

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