I wonder... would you really have Kara - now Kisa - purposely harm someone on promised threat? I'm liking this. I hope you can find time and inspiration to update. I'm very curious on where you are taking this, and if Kara will be found by her 'parents'.

Nice developement and transition. I like how you insert dream flashbacks to show how things were going so well until Kara's grandma passed away. I don't think it'd be so easy for a girl to get the guy's uniform but hey, its fun to bend the rules. I do like the modifications made to it.

Whoa. Extreme characterization. I would have liked to see a bit more detailed background for Kara, but you get the point across. This is definately a different introduction than what I'm used to, but I'm curious. So far so good.